Reviews for Love Forever
Guest chapter 3 . 7/2/2012
Jacob would never write a poem. You are a bad writer, seriously. Just stop. You are making Twilight look stupid.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
The characters don't talk like they do in the books. Also, the plot seems so jumpy. Like, Bella just says random things... yah?
luv4twilight chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
dude, really cute story! i liked da end da most. i really dont read long stories with chunks of words and no dialogue much, cuz its just butt-numbing! :))

well yea...really loves ur story.
Feathersblue17 chapter 19 . 8/11/2007
i realy love the story but on chapter 19 you can not see what the dress looks like and you should try to find a pic of the engament ring
I am Fizz chapter 28 . 7/17/2007
I loved it! It was a bit confusing at times up the good work!
KluTzXCliMbeRX101 chapter 14 . 7/4/2007
i love story it is really good! i love it a lot!
Elven at Heart chapter 29 . 6/24/2007
This was a really great story! Congrats on finishing!

Elven at Heart
starbook chapter 26 . 6/23/2007
i love nathaniel already! well, i might be a little biased because that's my bro's name, but still...he seems nice.

onward...
starbook chapter 18 . 6/23/2007
cool!

a bit ooc for bella to look foreward to shopping but i can actually imagine that...and it's a special occasion, right?

i think that coach clapp is a dude.
starbook chapter 15 . 6/23/2007
hahahahaha! i love alice!
starbook chapter 13 . 6/23/2007
omg! so sad, but still good!

onward to read the next chappie...
starbook chapter 10 . 6/23/2007
oh my god!

i hope your father's okay!

it's good that you're writing about this...it helps.

still so good!

onward to read through...
LovinTopazEyes91 chapter 29 . 6/23/2007
KOOL!

CANT WAIT TO READ IT!
starbook chapter 7 . 6/23/2007
aw, jake...

glad he stuck up for her! great job so far!

on to read the rest...
Annabel H. Wildes chapter 28 . 6/23/2007
Great story but what's with the Jasper?
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