|Reviews for A Life Redirected|
| supernatfem76 chapter 4 . 7/6/2009
You painted an excellent picture of Blue Earth in the winter. I liked every scene in this chapter. They were all very touching and I couldn't help but smile while reading them.
| supernatfem76 chapter 3 . 7/5/2009
I loved John's comforting words to Dean, Dean's words to his father about home and family. There were so many touching scenes in this chapter I lost count. I could really relate to John's concerns about making sure Sam would have a proper caregiver if something happened to him and Dean. I have those same concerns about my own brother. Hoppers was a nice touch. With each chapter I get closer to shedding tears but I can't help but read on since this is such a touching story.
| supernatfem76 chapter 2 . 7/5/2009
Good mix of interesting medical information and emotional scenes. There were so many scenes that pulled at my heartstrings. I felt so bad for John and Dean that they had to drive to the hospital instead being able to be by Sam's side. This was such an emotional chapter. I came close to crying a couple of times for this one. Great job!
| supernatfem76 chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
I loved how you began this chapter with Who Wants To Live Forever. That is one of my favorite Queen songs. Excellent job writing how Sam looked when he was pulled from the lake and Dean's and John's reactions to seeing Sammy like that. Very emotional! An excellent beginning to what I think is going to be a very heart wrenching story.
| Sylvie91 chapter 10 . 7/1/2009
I know, I am a little too late in reviewing. But I realized that I never wrote a review for this story. Of course you know that I love it a lot.
I read it again today and I have some thoughts on it. Do you ever wonder what would have happened if Sammy died? How would that impact the developement of this story? Would Dean still have went to college and met Julie?
Also, do you ever imagine how things would have been if Sammy lived, but was more damaged and was never able to regain basic functioning?
I loved this story and I can't wait to see what you have planned next :-)
| Jaddis chapter 10 . 4/30/2009
I was a good story, but I was kind of hoping Sam would be restored back to the way that he was. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but... then again, it is an AU.
| Momy2ElmoFriend2 chapter 10 . 3/7/2009
All I can say to this story is WOW! I was crying at all the sad parts, and couldn't stop crying with the first death. Then with the last one, that scene was so touching. Especially how accepted it, you did a wonderful job.
| Red K 5 chapter 10 . 2/25/2009
I’m sad that this story had to end before it got farther… I like how you had it almost like Devil’s Trap and In My Time of Dying with the car crash and John dying but instead Dean wasn’t in the car like in the show and speaking of Dean… I’m glad he went to college and I know this is AU but I keep hearing the word flying and I can’t help but think about his fear of flying and then I found myself thinking if Dean isn’t afraid to fly in this story is Sammy still afraid of clowns or not... you have no idea how maney time I said the word cute so lets just say I think I said cute more times the Dean said son of a bitch on the show
this story is almost like my story request except Sam’s brain injury wasn’t as bad as it is in your story:
what if when Dean was four he accidentally dropped baby Sammy on the head as he was running out of his burning house (John never knew)… Sammy has some trouble reading in school and is diagnosed with dyslexia and Dean blames himself
as a baby Sammy never cried after the accident… he only whimpers and made little noises as if he had forgotten how to cry... Sam was a little slow at learning stuff and had a speech impediment but got better before collage (eventually he got good enough grades to get a scholarship to Stanford)
when Sam was 3 (John was on a hunt… Sam and Dean was at Pastor Jim Murphy’s house) he got injured and Pastor Jim took him to the hospital… the doctor shines a light in his eyes and says that he’s slow to respond and Dean says that’s normal for him… at some point the doctor misdiagnose Sam with Autism (he can walk but can’t talk yet)
when Sam got an acceptance letter to Stanford Dean proud of him and is glad he didn’t ruin Sam’s life… Sam reminds Dean that it wasn’t he’s fault… coming back from somewhere John overhears and demands ‘what wasn’t Dean’s fault’… both boys fall silent
| LizzieJoe chapter 10 . 2/21/2009
Brilleant you are a a legend in my eyes
You make me cry in some bit
it was amazing :)
| irishgirl9 chapter 10 . 11/17/2008
What a heartbreakingly beautiful story. You should put a tissue warning on this story b/c you definitely need a box nearby.
Poor Sammy, I was afraid that he wouldn't wake up. I'm glad he did, but it was sad to see how different he was from the boy he had been.
I love that Dean and John never left his side. I was afraid you were going to have John leave Sam and return to hunting. I'm glad you didn't. Then when John took that one last hunt, I was afraid you were going to kill him off.
I love that how even though Sam was different, John Dean and Jim didn't treat him that way. The conversation that Sam had with his dad about the word retarded was very well written. Not once did John ever see Sam that way and I think that made a big difference in Sam's recovery.
Interesting twist with Dean going off to college. I could see why he'd want to stay behind, but John was right. He and Jim wouldn't live forever and Dean would need a way to be able to help support Sam. I like that even though Dean made a life at school and a life with Julie, he didn't leave Sam behind.
I love Sam's relationship with his niece. Their bond was so sweet and I love how like her father and grandfather, she didn't treat Sam as though he were different.
I was balling when John died. It was so sad how Dean had to make the decision to pull the plug. Sam asking for his dad was heartbreaking especially when he demanded God return his dad.
I really like how you fleshed out Pastor Jim. He was only mentioned a couple of times on the show and featured in only one eppie, nut you really brought him to life. I love how he was there throughout everything.
One thing that really made this story work for me was that Dean didn't blame John for the accident even though John blamed himself. I've ready so many fics where if Sam so much as gets a paper cut, Dean refuses to speak to John. If Dean was so full of blame for his dad, I don’t think they would have had as much focus on Sam as they. Would be too hard if they weren’t getting along.
Brilliant story! You truly are a gifted writer. Thank you for sharing it with us.
| supernaturalmommy chapter 10 . 6/23/2008
I was absolutely drawn into this story, after it was recc'ed on a Supernatural Storyfinders community on Live Journal. I'm so glad I clicked to read it. I have three special needs kids and you've captured so many of the ups and downs within the dynamics of the Winchesters lives. You did a wonderful job!
| freedomfly chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Had this on my 'to read' list for a while and read it over a couple of nights. The way Dean looked after Sam and always protected him was heart warming. Also the fact that Dean's kids accepted Sam as he was instead of the way some adults react was really cute. I always love your limp!Sam.
| Thorny Hedge chapter 10 . 3/12/2008
It's so hard to read about Sam in any diminished capacity, because he's so darn warm and brilliant. This was a hard, hard read, but very well-written. *sniffle* I loved it.
| Von chapter 10 . 1/12/2008
This story was very well written, but.. it thoroughly depressed me. SO much so that I almost feel sick.
I think part of that was the fact that I thought Sam would get better, you know? But he just got worse and as Dean went off to Uni, all I saw was Sam trudging along and I felt like 'Why did they force him to stay alive when this is all he'll have?' I felt angry and grieved.
(Chuckles) Maybe this fic should change the 'angst' tag to 'tragedy'.
So, I although this fic made me feel absolutely horrible and I wish I'd never laid eyes on it.. :) I did want to take the time to remark that you do write wonderfully and despite the constant sensation of dread, I just could NOT stop reading. :D
| MinxFlamedancer chapter 10 . 1/6/2008
Wow Dawn, that was really good. I started reading this back in May and then didn't have a computer all summer so I sorta forgot about it, but then shortly after Christmas I found it again, and as long as it was it was still really good. I found it extremely hard to read Sam that way at first, and I still can't quite picture it properly, but it was a neat idea. And I love how you took Dean's love and protectiveness towards his brother and spawned that through the years to give him a family - that I almost could see. But getting back to reality, our boys still have a long road of hunting ahead of them (I refuse to believe the writer's strike will not end and we won't get more), and whatever they come across I hope it sparks new ideas into your brain, cuz I love reading your stories. One day I'll get through all of em, I will. :) So thanks for this one, and good luck with your future (and current) endeavors.