Reviews for Shadows
Nameless-Anonymous-Author chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
I think you wrote very well in this, the description of everything gave it a poetic feel and the shortness of it gave it a greater impact. Good job!
Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Interesting story. I enjoyed it. Though I don't really like the fact that Neji did not want to help her :(

Keep writing!

M.I.
OSYH chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Oh wow, I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet! I loved it. Simple yet poignant. You did well portraying the dangerous job of shinobi, and characterizing Tenten as a girl realizing the precious moments that she has to avoid getting killed. And especially having somebody to go through the same thing as her. :) Lovely job!
omurice chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Good job with one of my favorite couples.
Bloody Sapphire Blade chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Wow! This is really well written. You're a great writer!
Azaria Stromsis chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
really good story! what happens in the middle of the battle, i can really picture tenten having that realization. also neji was portrayed really well. Keep up the good stories!

Cyclone
Yugao chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
I love the way you portrayed the characters here. Nice job on Tenten especially, and on Neji at the end. All in all a great mix of action and in-depth character sketches. Keep it up!