Reviews for The Difference of One Shinobi
DarkRavie chapter 22 . 12/31/2007
Great chapter. I look forward to reading more.

Happy New Year!
TT chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
absolutely fucked
leo chapter 7 . 12/28/2007
wow i guess i like quizzes you can be very smary super quiz
leo chapter 6 . 12/28/2007
this is one of the best chapters yet it is very sexy
leo chapter 5 . 12/28/2007
wow you just picked it right back up in this chapter
leo chapter 4 . 12/28/2007
the story starts to drag a little in this chapter
leo chapter 3 . 12/28/2007
very good especially the part about raping small children
leo chapter 2 . 12/28/2007
excellent writing where do you come up with this stuff
leo chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
wow awesome
wolvknight chapter 21 . 11/30/2007
Yama Ibi!
DarkRavie chapter 20 . 11/23/2007
Great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
wolvknight chapter 20 . 11/23/2007
weird chap..
wolvknight chapter 19 . 11/15/2007
Ok few things one way way way way to much talking during the h urry up part with the 4 bad guys Naruto should be more scared he isnt that smart at this age and it is pathetic that there were four of them and they did not kill Naruto thee end.

P.S Citrus hued
wolvknight chapter 18 . 11/14/2007
Ok the fight with Raiden was disturbing stupid and weird. Also you kinda diverted from the storyline and went on another Sarutobi rant that didnt hold much relevance to the story. Finally you are taking the hate of the Haruno quite far at this point it isntm aking much sense at all why they are involved this much in the stoy except for bashing it is quite annoying in all actuality.
wolvknight chapter 17 . 11/14/2007
Story is much to garbled try adding dates before a paragrapgh that is time skipping also the whole Zabuza Haku thing was way ooc.
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