Reviews for After Pie
HobbitLover4eva chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Well...its sweet yes, but I also fear that its not safe. This type of thing so easily leads to sex, so I wouldn't do it or encourage it myself. Particular since Ed and Winry are young and not married.
Took-Baggins chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
ah, that has got to be one of my favorite scenes in the manga. i like how you ended it, since the original version didn't go that far into it.
Ishte chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
I loved this. it was so sweet my teeth ached afterwards. I'm enjoying the sort of open style of your writing, where time feels a little more fluid. I like how the storytelling doesn't have to feel so point to point. Thanks for sharing.
strandedthought chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
Nicely done!
S J Smith-Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
Very, very sweet.
Inuchemist10 chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
I liked it but it still seemed EDWINish ( and not thats that's bad or anything, edwin forever) very good hope to read more!

I like all the detail, it give colorful characters!
Syolen chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
Sweet little EdWin moment ! I wish this had really happened in the manga.