|Reviews for A Surprise For Holly|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
I think that was a perfectly horrible story. It was way too short and too much romance.
Make it Better!
| randomosity4arty chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
And a insane centaur god father. Hahaha, nice
| Dr.Scrubs chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Xx Artemis Rox mi Sox xX
i think they did do the deed, Artemis just didnt know that she was able to get pregnant so soon and yeah it was all too fast, there should have been signs, the pregnancy shouldnt have blind sided anyone.
also, i personally didnt like the wings bit, just my personal feelings on that part.
all that aside, it was a great story.
| crazy person alert chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
his name is spelled "Foaly". He is a recurring character. His anem should be known. *is very defensive of her favorite character*
I dont see how this cane be "K" . . .
Good writing though.
| yellow 14 chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Very cute. Very sweet. I look farward to seeing what happens to Athena Fowl. Keep writing
| The Final Lament chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
pl\ tell me there will be a sequal or more chapters
1) the wings need explaining and 2) it just seems unfinished
| RoseRedMisery chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
i think i laughed so much i cried. when i read the summary, i expected holly to walk in on Artemis jacking off or making out with minerva.
hahahaha holly had a baby.
but its spelled foaly just to let you know
| Xx Artemis Rox mi Sox xX chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
Okay... just a few things...
1: A fairy can oly have a baby every 24 years but it doesn't happen automaticly. They have to... you know. Intercourse.
2: Fowley...? FOALY Skool...? SOOL Yikes that bugged me a bit.
3: It's too put forward. Artemis and Holly all the sudden are going out and their having a baby out of nowhere?
You could make a really fic out of this but it's too cheesy. Sorry.