Reviews for The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very good story, I recall reading this exact same story, but it had a couple of differences, like Harry discovers the truth about what Myrtle has done and she has to convince him she really does love him, and he has to accept before a certain time and date, or she returns to her former state. 0)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story. I like that Myrtle is happy. Kira P.D: I wish I knew what happened to Remus and Tonks in the battle |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is bad |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story didn't so much have a plot as it had a collection of subplots that all loosely tied together. It felt kind of like reading several episodes of a TV show, where each episode is largely bself contained and resolves itself before moving onto the next one. It's not really a huge problem, but I think it could have benefitted from a bit more...focus, I guess, on an overarching plot thread. I enjoyed this story, particularly how many unique ideas it had. The twist at the end caught me completely off guard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I think this was written before Deathly Hallows was released |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um just so you know, Myrtle was in Ravenclaw, and her last name was Warren... Unless this is an AU? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Some countries DO HAVE chemical castration as punishment for rapists... Absolutely nothing wrong or barbaric about it... Punishment that fits the crime, castration is also invasiv, and the flogging would be like the humiliation and violation the rape victim endured... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Myrtle Malone... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly this was more than a little strange but I actually loved it, also now that I think about it the similarities between myrtle and hermione really are uncanny |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pathetic piece of shit, just like canon Harry, even with with all diversions from canon. Maybe even worse. I don't care what will happen next. This pathetic worm simply don't deserve to be protagonist. Such a waste of time, reading fics with pathetic Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was poorly attempt on redeem that slut. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I get that Harry is still a little in shock, super trilled that Hermione is still with him, and has some combination of the "I'm getting laid"/ new relationship head fuzz, but he should have figured it out by now. There have been too many indications of something being wrong. Still like the story and appreciate the references. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Xenophillius Lovegood. Not Lawrence. |