|Reviews for New Beginnings|
| moeexyz chapter 21 . 11/4/2007
| animegirl33b chapter 6 . 10/13/2007
love this chapter.
| roxy chapter 20 . 10/9/2007
was that the ending?
| roxy chapter 20 . 10/9/2007
omg!i love it!it is so cute how hyde loves her so much and would do everything for her.
| LoveUnrequited chapter 20 . 10/9/2007
“Jackie, why were you… why did you… Jackie, why?” Donna stared at her friend. Jackie shrugged. “Something to do.”
BURN ON FEZ! This is what Jackie's reaction to Fez should have been in Season 8 if it had been necessary for her to be with him at all. NOT that he would be the love of her life... just someone to kill time with until she got back together with Hyde. :nod:
"you definitely wouldn’t have let me convince you to dance with me to Abba.”
This was a very sweet moment! Maybe a TINY OOC on Hyde's part, but sometimes a writer has to take a little artistic license. Then again, Hyde was mostly able to do what Jackie needed him to... most of the time, anyway. I think that this was a very fitting character development.
Keep it up, girl!
| LoveUnrequited chapter 19 . 10/9/2007
I love the fact that Eric is trying to basically get Donna to name the baby after him. :lol: So funny.
And why didn't Eric realize that Hyde's inebriated state meant that he was torn apart inside? If anyone could spot that, Eric should be that person. I doubt that Hyde even knows that's why he's gone and gotten himself so fucked up.
I love a good Donna and Eric matchmaking caper...
This'll be good. :D
| Zeppleingirl08 chapter 20 . 10/6/2007
aw i loved this chapter. :D I LOVE JACKIE AND HYDE!
| flamingoboy511 chapter 19 . 10/4/2007
Love this story, sorry I haven't really been reviewing, I'm busy too. Keep it up!
| BrownEyedDevil chapter 19 . 10/4/2007
i cant wait to see how donna is trying to get them back together. hyde is such a... dumbass. sorry that i didnt review earlier, i started to read about a week ago but got thrown off and forgot the title. but now i found it again and cant wait to read more!
| RegardstoBroadway chapter 18 . 9/22/2007
Hooray for updates! I wish I could update... grr. Damn writer's block.
So, we're a few months later and Donna's had a baby girl. Aww!
Dumb Kelso isn't even there for the birth of his own kid. No... he's feeling up Laurie in Red's kitchen of all places. Serves him right to be caught by both Red and Fez. Humph.
Jackie and Hyde need to get things together. They both love each other. Am I the only one who sees this? I think not! :lol:
Sorry this review sucks, but I'm not really in the mood for reviewing and I wanted to make sure that I remember to do so.
| relic yuy chapter 17 . 8/26/2007
Hello. I really like this story. And I am very pleased with the Kelso/Fez sidestory. Very cute. Donna is being a complete bitch and she should be ashamed of herself for blaming it on the baby. I have been pregnant before and I am pregnant now and I can tell you that pregnancy does a lot to your hormones BUT not nearly as intense Donna's. Truth is pregnancy makes you emotionally unstable but the way you choose to react to it is your own. Some women cry, others grow detached and some bitch. But the thing is, the bitchiness isn't due to the pregnancy but the woman. There is no excuse for Donna's behaviour and the fact that she is still blaming everyone else makes me think she will be a terrible mother. I hope for the sake of that child that she will get her shit together or if she can't she'll decide to find the baby a better home.
Good for Eric for finally standing up to her. I think he deserves better but what can you do? Hyde and Jackie's first time was disappointing? Not surprising but it was cute!
| flamingoboy511 chapter 17 . 8/25/2007
Hey, I'm back from a long hiatus. Awesome chapter like always. I loved the Fez and Kelso bit, it was funny. Keep it up!
| Zenkindoflove chapter 17 . 8/25/2007
Aw, no smut. That's okay though. Not everyone is comfortable iwth writing it. I'll just make up in my own mind how everything lead up to them doing it and then what happened during the doing it. :D
I thought the dialog between Jackie and Hyde after leaving Donna's house was really hysterical. I loved that Hyde started getting paranoid that Kelso' girl robot theory was true and then Jackie said, "What, did you think I was a robot or something?" That had me rolling. I really liked the pre date convo in the car as well. Hyde was so sweet but I also like that Jackie understood and was okay with them not going to some fancy restaurant.
Donna really is being mega bitch, but hopefully this convo with Eric will help her see that she needs to cool out a little bit. :)
Great update and I can't wait for the next!
| RegardstoBroadway chapter 17 . 8/24/2007
Leave it to Donna to assume that they slept together on the couch. :shake head: Just because SHE... nevermind. Not going there. :lol:
I like how Hyde thought that he had to impress Jackie then all Jackie wanted was to be alone with him.
I understand why you skipped the smut, but can I give you some advice? When I was worried about posting smut, I wrote a one-shot. This way, I could try it out without "ruining" my story if it didn't come out right. That will allow you to see how well it goes over and let you decide it you want to include it in a later story.
Another thing, you could have been a little more vocal about the fact that they were going to have sex before you cut to afterwards. Like say how they pulled into the drive and started kissing on the porch and slowly began to remove each other's clothes all the way up the stairs. You don't have to give specifics - buttons, zippers, etc - but just paint a PG picture of what is going to go on. That way, people know it happened when you flash to after. I had to re-read it twice to figure that out.
Like I said, just a little advice, take it as you will. I've don't smut, I guess, successfully twice now so I'm still new at it myself. But if it's something you do want to try, those were just some tips.
Keep up the good work, girl!
| RegardstoBroadway chapter 16 . 8/24/2007
"You're so cute!" :lol: I cracked up everytime someone called Hyde cute. I can just see the look that would come over his face.
And the "proving my love" stuff was hysterical. So Jackie.
I totally get the "date not in this chapter stuff." With my story, it was the movie theater. I made the mistake of mentioning it and then it took me three chapters to get there. My reviewers were all like, "wtf? No theater?" You get around to it, and it will rock when you do.