Reviews for Falling
Blossoming-Flower26 chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
This story is ahmay-zing!I LOVE IT!

I love the way you made Alice sound like a different person than anyone has ever seen job!
MrsCullenOMG chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
PLEASE write more esme pov! im crying (trust me im not that much of a softie! i will love you forever!


Podge chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
THAT WAS AWESOME! Keep going with it!
Catch A Falling Star chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
This is so good!
OstentatiousNature chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
oh, very very interesting parallel

bella and esme both jumped off a cliff, i never thought about that.

wow! this was very good. the dialogue, reactions, and staying in character...all utterly amazing. you did a great job!

(and jeez this story is tough to find! _ i saw this story summary when i was looking up another fic, so i wrote this one down, and read the other one and came back to this one later. but u no how many stories on here are named falling? it took me 15 mintues to track down.)

but it was completely worth it! good job!
Christiecullen16 chapter 1 . 9/29/2007 have really good oneshots.
twilightxlove chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
This was great!

Just a bit of constructive criticism: try varying the sentence structure you use.

this was amazing though, very descriptive. I'm adding it to my favorites :-)
InnerShadow chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
That was excellent.