Rest in Peace...

This is the first story of yours that I'm reading. I'm on chapter one and I'm already in love with it! I'm loving the older Sakura with the long hair and dress sense and Kakashi's portrayal is fantastic. I love their partnership and friendship - they have a solid foundation of trust. They can definitely rely on one another! Chapter 2, here I come!

*Sigh* I always get sad when authors decide to write Kakashi as what amounts to average in looks without his mask. And I especially get sad when authors actually decide to give him droopy eyes. He doesn't have droopy eyes, for some reason the animators just draw him like that sometimes. But his actual eyes (in my opinion) are the ones shown in any combat or serious situation. Giving him droopy eyes is just lame.

beautiful story

You left this story off on the worst cliffhanger imaginable. I’m so hurt. I was really looking forward to seeing Sakura and kakashi resolve their issues.

I loved this story! It's a pity that the author was unable to finish it. She was a very good writer!

RIP.

I hope that wherever you are, you are happy and can see how much your stories were liked.

This story was amazing. I really hope you didn't give up on this story. I loved it. I hope everything is alright with you, and you just needed a little break..

Last updated in 2008 rip my heart. Why am I just finding out about this fic in 2023?!

G-d bless you!

Wherever you are, thank you for writing this. Your soul will live forever in your work.

Wherever you are, thank you for writing this. Your soul will leave forever in your work.

I've been enjoying this so far but this chapter really bothered me. Please keep an open mind as I explain, but I think the order of events is out of order. Spoiler...
Once inside the elevator, Sakura, in her agitated state, would have definitely tried to escape either through the emergency hatch or prying open the doors. Because these key factors weren't mentioned until the very end of the chapter, I was so focused and distracted by this fact of an easy escape, that I could not focus or be immersed in the dialogue. In my opinion, the order should have been Sakura tries to escape the elevator, cuts back to Ino and Gemna explaining that they've closed off all available exits, cuts back to the elevator and then the dialogue happens, etc.
You did mention as well that your beta reader is unavailable so I won't mention the errors. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to the conclusion of your story. Thank you!

I can never imagine Sasuke starting a fam with anyone else kther than Sakura... It ain't right. Evevn though I'm enjoying the story I can't find it in me to love having Sasuke marry anyone but Sakura.

I came here for the KakaSaku, and I am leaving with a newfound love for InoGenma that I honestly never considered. I am sad that I won’t find out what happens, but I am glad that I made the decision to finally read this, even knowing that there wouldn’t be a chapter 19 or more.. RIP..

so exciting

Omg Im glad she went back to him!