Reviews for Lily and James
M chapter 11 . 8/14/2011
I just want to say I have read a lot of chapters for this story and this chapter was realllly good. I think that if someone showed me this and told me ,"JK Rowling wrote this," I might believe them if I hadn't known better. :) this is great I love how you actually USE things from the actual books as back up because I hate it when people just make up things that would NEVER happen in the books. I've always wanted to read more about Lily and James and your stories let me do that :) thank you SO much :) and I love how you use good grammar and spelling and puntuation. I've read so many fanfics with terrible spelling and grammar and just plain bad English, that even though I understood the main idea, it wasn't enjoyable to read. so thanks again. and you're a great writer :)
Ella Marie Lily Talia Potter chapter 23 . 7/19/2011
I wish youd put it in order
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
So amazing! please keep up the good work on all of your chapters!
Guest chapter 23 . 5/17/2011
Please, please, please write more. I SINCERELY ADORE YOUR FIC!
Guest chapter 4 . 5/17/2011
I would just like to say that this is one of the best fics Ive read, no joke.
LilyLOVESProngs chapter 8 . 2/5/2011
love it!
blazingeyes chapter 7 . 1/9/2011
blazingeyes chapter 6 . 1/9/2011
Hm...interesting. Hope to read more!
blazingeyes chapter 5 . 1/9/2011
"Mhm, impressive your broom didn't tip over with the weight of your ego."

LMAO. Classic. Cute chap, again. loved it! :D
blazingeyes chapter 4 . 1/9/2011
I think this was the best chapter so far. The details of the flying scene were amazing and I love how you managed to keep Lily so in character! Plus, the ending was really good and not at all rushed, and thought out in a very smooth, coherent manner, sort of, if you catch my drift.

Write more! :)
blazingeyes chapter 3 . 1/9/2011
Nice. I found this chap well-detailed and well-written. keep it up! sry for the short reviews! :P
blazingeyes chapter 2 . 1/9/2011
aww...that part in Lily's POV was sad...:(
blazingeyes chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Aww...I actually liked that a lot. It showed more of their true characters behind all the teasing and picking on each other. Can't wait to read more!:D
MayHoran-Potter chapter 23 . 1/6/2011
Honestly? i loved ALL of these !

Write more please (:

Lilyflower98 (Tegan) (;
CrazyWildandProud chapter 23 . 12/8/2010
I love them all! I had a. Few favorites but I can't remember them so...
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