|Reviews for Lily and James|
| lalaloser96 chapter 5 . 8/3/2010
Thank you so much for the story I loved it! I think you really caught Lily and James's personalities. Even though we are not given much to work with I think you captured most the characters traits. I hope you write more.
| AHelpingHand chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Good story so far, but please make sure to fix the character tags on your story- Lily Luna P. is NOT Lily Evans P.! Lily Luna is Lily Evans' granddaughter! Just trying to alert you to the situation- people use these character tags to find stories. They won't find yours if yours has the wrong tags on it!
| Lola chapter 8 . 3/29/2010
Why is it that you bounce off the story too much? :(
You start at their 7th year, then bounce to their 5th year then go back to their second year. It is VERY, VERY, VERY confusing. : So frustrating. :'(
| Fiona chapter 14 . 1/11/2010
I think you skip around stories too much.
First your talking about lily hating james
then you have a chapter when they're married and have harry.
YOu should stop bouncing around so much
| Fiona chapter 7 . 1/11/2010
Your stories are really great!
I think you skipped too much time from chapter 6 to 7.
I would like to hear about how James proposed and how lily came to like James.
| Fiona chapter 2 . 1/10/2010
This is the best story I've ever read!
You are awesome!
And you should totally write more!
You might be better than J K Rowling, and that's saying something...
Please don't tell J K Rowling I said that
| ZukoLuvahh chapter 23 . 1/2/2010
THOSE WERE EFFING AMAZING! I ENJOYED EEVRY SINGLE ONE :D PLEASE WRITE MORE! U WRITE SO WEL :)
KEEP IT UP AND KEEP WRITING! :)
please and thank you ;D xDD
| Flamingo917 chapter 7 . 11/10/2009
| spannieren chapter 23 . 9/27/2009
great collection of stories - cant wait for more :)
| Jessica chapter 4 . 8/1/2009
I think the story is really good. But I am
only a few chapters in, I think on chapter
five. Keep writing,
| Kuri333 chapter 12 . 6/21/2009
Last 6 lines were precious!
I've read a lot of marauders/lily fanfic, yours is truly remarkable!
| glitterhallucinogens chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
i luv luv luv LUV IT!
| Mizz-Lizzy chapter 4 . 5/3/2009
great chapter.. but I just wanted to point out that James played seeker in his days, not chaser :P but anyways - great;)
| 24kluvmelly chapter 23 . 4/29/2009
ohohohohohohohohoh awesome! please post
| Evelyn chapter 23 . 3/30/2009
LOL! - That's a really good story! I love all of the short stories about how they get back on each other! Thanks for the stories! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!