|Reviews for The Icarus Complex|
| WQW chapter 16 . 2/28/2010
You have to update... you cant leave it here. Amazing Story!
| QWE chapter 15 . 2/28/2010
Wow... great chapter!
| MiR chapter 14 . 2/28/2010
Story just keeps getting better and better.
| QWE chapter 8 . 2/28/2010
This is a very interesting story!
| qw chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
WOW. Amazing first chapter...
| Haley's Comet chapter 16 . 10/23/2008
This. Story. Is. Amazing.
If you don't update...I may cry.
I'm just warning you. ]
| Brooks's-Babey chapter 7 . 7/23/2008
A litte confused with this chapter, but looking forward to reading more.
| Brooks's-Babey chapter 2 . 7/23/2008
I know I'm like a year late with this story, but I really like it so far. I will review again in a few chapters and let you know what I think.
I like your style of writing, very hard and not through rose tinted glasses at all, which I like. You make it quite humorous though, but totally believable. In short, well done on this story thus far :D
| Kaylamo chapter 16 . 2/13/2008
Holy shit, this is the most amusing FF I have ever read. You should really keep writing this! Usually I just lurk but I REALLY want to read more.
| sabie15 chapter 16 . 10/15/2007
wow this story is so complex
but i love it
Post More Soon
| Hurricane Jane chapter 16 . 9/8/2007
I very much enjoyed your story. Very much. I'm not really good at reviewing because I never know what to say other than "hey that's fantastic!" so I usually don't bother, which I know is tactless and defeats the whole point and the karma wheel spins right back around when I'm sitting here all "why didn't anyone review MY story?"
But seriously. beautiful work in some of these passages. I love what you have done with the characters. love it hard. AUs normally drive me nuts, but this? this. I liked this. Make more.
Also. Your profile is a riot.
| Lambbaby chapter 16 . 9/5/2007
Damn girl, how do I review this? I read the whole thing in one sitting and am now struggling for words.
Let's start at the beginning, shall we? Good.
I love that Liberty, whom I swear to god is me in middle school(and maybe even now) is in some position of power. Makes me smile.
.I love the girl, I truly do and if I played on the the side of the fence she'd be in heart is breaking for her and with her and all I want to do is cry whenever Paige breaks her.
Paige. Paige makes me want to laugh,scream and cry all at the same time. I love to love her and hate to hate her. But here...I think you've got her. That hard layer hiding under all the sugary sweetness. The sheep hiding the wolf.I can't wait to see more.
Jay. I'll be the first to admit that Jay is not my favourite. He's too...too everything I find undesirable. But here I like because he cries over Ellie or maybe because he wants to protect Alex or maybe because...who knows really. But I like him here.
Spinner. Gavin always makes me sad. He always seems so lost and confuzzled and unsure of what the fuck is going I see it more than ever. Wondering what the hell he did to piss everyone off so bad? Did he fuck Jimmy over again?
Marco. He's coming off as so lonely and so sad. What's with this Del Rossi versus the Hatizalkos thing though? How'd they convince Marco to be the inside man?
Jimmy. My poor poor Jimmy is still still getting messed around by the Whore from Who-ville, Ashley. Poor boy can never catch a break.
(God this is long. Going through all characters here)
I love porno Peter. He would be the perfect porno 's just sleazy and skeazy enough. And pornstar Craig. Love it.
Ellie. Ellie always rubbed me the wrong way. She was too intense and then too annoying and then not interesting enough. The only thing I did enjoy was her cutting issue. Made me watch some friends a little closer. Here...I kinda like her. Still debating.
Snake.I can't see him as a bad guy. He just screams defeneless to me.
Sean. Sean who I can never figure out. Sean who is with Ash while she's with Jimmy. Sean who is so good and yet so bad all at the same time.
And I love that you mention the , Toby, Emma, Manny, Darcy. I hope we get to see more of them.
Augh! There are so many more little things I want to address but for lack of time I can't. So lets summarize: I'm hooked here. Like a crackwhore, I'm hooked. If you don't update soon I may begin to go through withdrawl symptoms. I'm serious. This fic of yours is stuck in my veins now. Its just that good and that emotional and somehow certain things ring true with the real world and real hits you, this fic, when you least expect it to.
Whew!Longest review I've ever left I think. That's all for now. See you next chapter.
Btw what do you think of Jinx and Raven? As a couple?
| firefly1987 chapter 16 . 8/27/2007
so good please write more
| modernxxmyth chapter 16 . 8/15/2007
-lets out a sigh-
damn. that one was good. really, really good. i loved it. damnn. i really can't find words.
I know you said several chapters ago that you were worried about how you handled self-injury, seeing as you yourself haven't dealt with a problem. As a former self-injurer, rest assured that you're doing a fabulous job. It's been absolutely perfect.
I love jaylie and palex. Man. I don't even know what to say. Nice job.
| The Calendar Girl chapter 16 . 8/15/2007
Orange is "Mackin' on some fly honeys?" Interesting . . . would you mean bee's? They're "fly" aren't they?
Enough of me being a sarcastic smartass
The ending scene kicked major emotinal ass! And I laughed at the crotch grabbing.
Keep it up.
- The Calendar Girl