|Reviews for Desideratum|
| Sky Eclipse chapter 13 . 4/11
I logged in after almost a decade or so, just to give a review.
You have to finish this... it’s just so tragically beautiful, and I wish I could have seen the ending you envisioned...
Wherever you are now, I’ll hold on to the hope you will come back and finish this some day.
| Strangegaycandy chapter 13 . 4/2/2018
I really liked it i just wish you didnt leave it without finishing it
| Bibliophile AKA Ima chapter 13 . 11/5/2017
You were so close to finishing... This fic is really good.
| Bibliophile AKA Ima chapter 1 . 11/4/2017
WHAT A BEGINNING.
Starting with Rem's death, from her point of view... Are you trying to kill me?
I FEEL LIKE she Could have lived since she didn't actually Succeed in saving Misa, but... I get it... even trying isn't allowed... she could still die...
AND LIGHT. ACTUALLY HAVING THE NERVE TO BE ANGRY AT HER. YOU FORCED HER TO DO THIS. SHE ONLY KILLED TO STAY ALIVE AND WHEN YOU MADE HER. SHE NEVER OPPOSED YOU, EVEN. SHE DID THE BEST SHE COULD TO FOLLOW HER ORDERS AND THERE WAS JUST NO WAY SHE COULD HAVE DONE MORE.
...I always hate Light at this point.
Great concept for a fic
| Atemue chapter 11 . 6/27/2017
Wow, this has been an amazing ride so far, even though I know this story will not be finished, I just couldn't resist reading it after the summary, because your writing is really, really good.
I have one question, though. The link to that fancomic you offered does unfortunately no longer work, so I was wondering is there any chance at all to still see that artwork, because I love to look at fanart picturing stories I really like.
| SP777 chapter 1 . 4/10/2017
I've been reading a majority of DN stories from the early beginnings of this page and working my way up to the newest current, so my delight in reading this is a breath of fresh air. The events in this is so well thought out that and the fact you're trying to keep them in character as much as possible is commendable.
Now reading lots of fanfiction nothing is new under the sun, but I SWEAR I came across a story at that was somewhat similar to this, I don't know if they were inspired by you or just coincidence...hope it's coincidence because I don't condone someone taking another person's work or the MAJORITY of their ideas and trying to make it their own...or maybe it IS you at another website...who knows.
Anyway look forward to the completion of this. Good job!
| bartlettpear chapter 13 . 12/28/2016
I wonder if L will die first and then Light shortly after or will it be the other way around? I think L will die when he embraces and identifies by a single name but considering Light since swtiches between names, L might not even die and it will just be Light who dies. Their honeymoon is coming to an end:-( Misa recognizing the fervent adoration she sees in Teru is interesting because it feels so clinical. I like the easy affection L and Light show when they have sex with each other and adore how the if isn't any thing brought up about top versus bottom, just pleasure and giving it? Thanks for writing and happy new year!
| bartlettpear chapter 10 . 12/27/2016
Ah, unless I am misinterpretating things, Aiber is picking Light up for the mafia?
| bartlettpear chapter 8 . 12/27/2016
I am loving getting to travel through their eyes because I don't travel myself. Have you been to all these places you are using? That's really cool if you are because one you travelled about and two your recall of the trips :D And even if you haven't gone, I am still having fun reading how you are describing their trip. Them making out and walking on tightrope next to each other but still enjoying the companionship is nice. I declare that I am one of the ones enjoying this story :D I really liked their conversation on the bench and how that both want passion and Light wanted to try to be in love, his uneasiness with physical affection, whether in participating or talking about it is endearing.
| bartlettpear chapter 7 . 12/27/2016
Considering that they kissed again, will L be getting sick again or since he recently recovered, is he immune? The thought that the traveling is their honeymoon before the execution or someone's death crossed my mind and your last line makes me think this really won't have a happy ending. This is still a lovely and interesting unfolding fic. I have my suspicions that the head of Interpol or one of the two that planned out the use of the piece of death note may be behind Light's capture or death. The old lady makes sense to me because the truth for her is that the world really is becoming safer, I would likely be like the masses and be thankful someone is finally doing something to make the world safer without having to be paid to do it, like some such of community service :b I appreciate Matsuda successfully telling the Chief to go home using L's words to back him up because finally someone is showing him with some common sense versus being useless because how the heck would he have gotten to where he was if he really were useless. Thanks for writing!
| bartlettpear chapter 6 . 12/27/2016
As Light was monologuing in his head, I was stuck on L's trying to get you sick too, that's why he kissed you, go brush your teeth, take some meds and eat something. Save yourself Light! And- he got sick :-l I am enjoying the flashbacks. I was wondering about Light's skin sensitivity so him being sick explains that. Is it weird to think two grown men sleeping in the same bed together is cute?
| bartlettpear chapter 5 . 12/27/2016
The kiss was soo disgusting because L is sick and eww xD Omg, I was just afraid you would make it worse by having L throw up too, I am super glad you did not because I feel like throwing up myself lol It was nice how Light had fun exploring the city and how they discuss Kira points is funny.
| bartlettpear chapter 4 . 12/27/2016
I feel sorry for L most certainly, but I am also enjoying their banter and mutual assholishness. I'm just curious if Light informed his family's was going to eloped- I mean up and leave with L lol. I remember laughing when L awkwardly declined Soichiro's invitation to stay at his house which was seriously super weird in the first place.
| InsanityIsClarity chapter 5 . 10/18/2016
Hey so I'll review it in full when I get done, but I just wanna say something real quick.
"An obvious tourist, what the hell, he was clearly Asian and there was no way many people would think of him as a native Russian. "
Russia is half European and half Asian- and while Moscow is in the European part, there are still plenty of places Light could come from in Russia and appear Asian. (If he spoke it'd still be a problem though.)
Just wanted to make you aware. Great story so far!
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/12/2016
Lord serria ,my highness, I am begging you to finish this masterpiece ! How could you mercilessly leave us at such a cliffhanger? It's heartbreaking and depressing,,,,,,, plsssssss at least shoot an eye for this! Write one word or two...