Reviews for Catching the Wave |
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![]() ![]() Oh what a cute story and great ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! I especially loved the last line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dotty gets her heart's desire to keep up with the neighbors, which is adequate recompense for Magda's rude behavior. Amanda, on the other hand, needs a working toaster. How else will she make the perfect B-L-T sandwich? Being gifted a microwave that she has lived without for her entire life is not as meaningful as replacing her toaster, which she uses almost every day. The appliance delivery man and Lee are equally mystified by Amanda's behavior. Great fun to read and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading and reviewing all your S&MK stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. .very cute but now I'm sad because this is your last SMK story ...sure hope you will write more soon. Thanks for sharing the ones you did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very enjoyable. Also very much in character. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved that! Thanks for sharing. Linda |
![]() ![]() I think you did an excellent job in keeping the dialogue in character, which is hard to remember how they were in the first episodes (unless you are lucky enough to have them on tape or DVD). Fun story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect! Perfect! Perfect! Not only did you capture Dottie's rambling ability, but Amanda's guilt at trying to avoid Dottie's inquisition! LOL |
![]() ![]() Cute story. '... been drug backward through a vacuum cleaner...' But the past tense of 'to drag' is dragged. 'Drug' is something you get at a pharmacy, unless it's illegal.:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hooray! And a good first season story to boot. Though it seems a tad out of character for Magda to do something nice, it's a good touch. And Amanda's last line is quite characteristic. Thanks for the gift! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well-written, perfectly characterized- plus, I love the way Amanda confused poor Charlie. Great little ficlet! |