Reviews for Coming Back To You
abbyweyr chapter 7 . 2/5/2014
Loss of faith in Bella there for a bit Edward. If the pack told Charlie about the Cullens they would be breaking the treaty.
abbyweyr chapter 6 . 2/5/2014
Stupid shape shifters! Could Sam renounce Emily?
abbyweyr chapter 5 . 2/4/2014
Good conversation. She held out and said what was needed. Good that Edward realized his jealous idea of killing Jacob was a bad idea. Now she's been kidnapped? More reading tomorrow.
abbyweyr chapter 4 . 2/4/2014
I'll allow Edward thinking Bella is his and Jacob will never have her for now. Sooner rather than later I hope he realizes that if Bella does love Jacob, killing him would hurt Bella and if he really loves her, he wouldn't want to do that.
abbyweyr chapter 3 . 2/4/2014
Nice that Rosalie softened up and said what had been her thoughts. Good and sad question Bella asks.
abbyweyr chapter 2 . 2/4/2014
Took you long enough to wake up Jacob. What if it had been Victoria? Nice working of Bella waking up to see Edward and think it a dream. Emmett rubbing off on Rosalie...great lines to relieve some tension.
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Good beginning. His conflicted feelings are there - about being there at all and then once inside finding Jacob there and what that might mean. Do wonder about Jacob not waking up, that seems unlikely.
Motherof8 chapter 22 . 1/8/2014
Really great story. You did an excellent writing job. Thanks
Motherof8 chapter 21 . 1/8/2014
That was intense
Motherof8 chapter 18 . 1/8/2014
That was do heartwrenching
Motherof8 chapter 16 . 1/8/2014
This was an OOC edward
Motherof8 chapter 14 . 1/8/2014
Gee, he is even more stubborn, and arrogant
Motherof8 chapter 13 . 1/8/2014
Wow, not used to this dark edward
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 1/8/2014
Boy, she really is an idiot
Motherof8 chapter 10 . 1/8/2014
Boy, she is sooooo stubborn
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