|Reviews for Trick No Treat|
| Devianta chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
Cool story. The toxic waste conversation was a bit awkward. It was... I don't know. The part where Danny, Sam, and Tucker were arguing over who would get drowned in toxic waste was a bit strange. I just can't see that happening.
Also, when you said "when a prank goes too far" I was expecting something more along the lines of Glenda and Glen setting up some trick (a pumpkin falling on Danny) and it goes wrong for some odd reason (said pumpkin self-combusts and lights Danny's head on fire). This was more like a "hey we're not appreciated enough let's go kill someone so we can feel important" sort of thing. It didn't look like a prank. Pranks don't involve killing people, at least not by my definition.
On the plus side, Glen and Glenda are likeable and believable characters. I like the general idea of the fic.
You did a fairly good job! Keep writing!