|Reviews for Just Waiting|
| spacecavy chapter 13 . 11/13/2013
So beautiful. I loved every word of it. You struck the perfect balance between drama and comic relief, and made it all feel very believable.
| spacecavy chapter 10 . 11/13/2013
Oh my gosh this is the best Sirius/Harry father/son type fic I have EVER read! This chapter was just epic in its hilariousness. You really have the characters spot on. The bonding scenes are just sweet enough to be touching, but not mushy and over the top like in most of these fics. I can totally see Sirius and Harry acting like this together.
| CharlotteSoanes1990 chapter 10 . 9/28/2013
Kings is called ring of fire in the UK! I love that game. Keep going this is awesome.
| FirePhoenix86 chapter 6 . 6/5/2013
Harry literally just lost someone he cared about because he was tricked...I find it really hard to be believe that Harry would fall for another trick that fast. In fact, because you made him fall for it in your story, I have to wonder if your version of Harry is a complete imbecile.
The fact that you had him leave without his wand...confirms that you are making Harry way too OOC.
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/4/2013
Hi I know it's probably a bit late and you won't read it anymore since your story is from 2007 but I have to say it's pretty brilliant! (sry for my mistakes, english isn't my first language) your characterization of Sirius and Harry is very well done and realistic (there are a lot of very unrealistic stories nowadays). So if you read this, I really liked it
| lise pretter chapter 9 . 7/20/2012
Haha they are in my city! (I live in Vegas) I like this story a lot :)
| doggydoogy chapter 13 . 7/11/2012
This story was sad, but really good. I enjoyed it very much. One of my absolute favorite parts was when Harry got drunk. And the embarrassment war. Hilarious. You are a great writer. I always enjoy traditions fanfiction because its always interesting to read the kind of stories come up with. Thanks again for the read :)
| Neon Lazy Llama chapter 13 . 6/18/2012
:)! great story and chapter please add more!
| Weller4ever chapter 13 . 11/26/2011
Very, very good story! )
| V. L. Crawford chapter 13 . 11/13/2011
That was so sad
| V. L. Crawford chapter 10 . 11/13/2011
This is a great story so far.
| madmaddiee chapter 13 . 4/13/2011
Beautiful story! Funny at times, had me crying at others, and simple! I hate it when stories have soo much detail it takes two hours to read like, three chapters. I got through this quickly and enjoyed every second! Great job!
| phoenixsong11 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
It had to be a marauder huh? Little sad that you killed off Remus , but then again it had to be one of them. It couldn't have just been a death eater i suppose. Great story anyway though! Lots of emotion.
| ClassIsCanceledForPESS214Today chapter 13 . 10/5/2010
This was beautiful.
I cried. Alot, actually.
Which is probably good, because crying makes me tired, and I've been insomniac-y for the last six/seven-some hours.
Again, it was beautiful.
Thanks for posting.
(and sorry for not signing in. I was earlier, but I guess my three days were over or something ... and I am actually finally tired enough to try to sleep)
| PsychoticNari chapter 13 . 8/23/2010
very nice *sniff and starts sobbing* good job