While this was certainly written in a time no one knew the "true" story about itachi and Obito and the Akatsuki I actually prefer this one over the canon we got.

There's really a sense of lightness here in the beginning, just a bit of Obito and his team interacting before he has to babysit Itachi and that too is fun for the both of them right until the fateful day where Obito actually dies.

But in a way, the lightness never was really present, we already know the outcome of Obito's fate(at least in this one) and it all reads like a last hurrah, the calm before the storm that sinks the ship but beyond that, we actually realize just how much Itachi is internalizing everything Obito says down to a story he changed, coupled that with his frustration of the complacency and laziness of the clan it really changed his worldview.

Of course, add that in with the grief of losing the person he respected the most and the twisting of what he learned from Obito and we get the birth of a monster, one who in a way similar to his canon counterpart is guided by love as well, although one of a much more malign nature.

Either way, I love this story and will always come back to it.

Hell yeah Itachi!

Really good dark fic

Goddamnnnnn I started reading this thinking it’s all fluff and stuff like that and I was right...half way to the story it was adorable then made me cry to that part when Obito died /3 but then I was surprised when it turned out Itachi was really crazy at the end! Like literally! He had Obito’s advices interpreted the wrong way. Man, never expected the twist. Amazing work! Kudos!

La historia me ha dejado flipando está genial

It's so fun reading the fanfics that came out early in the series' run. I still remember starting out as a fan of Good!Kabuto.

It's really sad. I'm so proud of ur story! Amazing

This is so well-written. I love the contrast between Obito's well-meaning advice and how it became warped. Thank you!

Omg this is one of the greatest Itachi and Obito fanfics ever!

update v: now

Dark yet beautifully written. Very well done indeed!

I wanna marry this fic and drown in the irony. Great job

Wow this was fucking great. Like, I really like this AU, holy shit.

Wow! I don't even know heck about narruto yet I read this and for someone who only reads batman that is saying a lot! AMAZING!

Haha, itachi. Ur so funny. *eats dango and dies. Oops