|Reviews for The Journey Home|
| Leather2Lace chapter 27 . 6/8/2013
very nice story. small suggestion? you don't need to add the summary warnings & disclaimer at the beginning of every chapter. also, I would have loved it if Anna ended up having Gabriel's child- I mean after all the times they were intimate I found it slightly unrealistic that she didn't- and it would make the ending less sad as a part of him is physically with her always. either way very nice story thank you for sharing!
| kelsey chapter 27 . 4/5/2013
Omg ... thismade me cry I was hoping anna and gabriel would stay together :( very well writen and I enjoyed reading it
| Arrietti chapter 27 . 10/3/2012
This was very well written... I couldn't believe that I never knew about it until now. Everything about this was beautiful and exciting. Eventhough I wasn't fond of the religious aspects of the story near to the end, I still enjoyed it a lot. The fighting scenes was well done and had good descriptions. I adore the love between Van Helsing and Anna. I could clearly feel the emotions between the two of them through your writing. The separation at the end made me tear. I was hoping for a fairy tale ending, not a bittersweet one... Your story and the movie are trying to kill me with melancholy.
Wonderful story, I love it.
| Telley1493 chapter 27 . 12/23/2011
i cannot even. i found this last night after watching van helsing again and being ridiculously frustrated by the ending. i always am. sooooo i decided to search fanfiction for some anna/gabriel smut and lovliness. and i found you.
OHMYGOD I HONESTLY DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY TO YOU RIGHT NOW EXCEPT YOU ARE MY FAVOURITE.
this story was really well written, and the plot was fantastic. the only issue i have is with the ending. WHY DOES SHE NOT GO WITH HIM. i totally would. dear lord would i ever. methinks you should write an alternate ending as well with her choosing to go with him. because even though this story ends beautifully and i cried a squillion tears at every turn, i want them to be together.
DONT GET ME WRONG THOUGH, i still love this ending. but yeah. you dont have to write the other way and listen to my crazy babbling. i have read this straight the whole way through so i am kinda tired and hypo and all that. but still.
sorry for this long review. i can never seem to express my emotions in a short amount of words. oh well.
| angel de acuario chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
| Wolf Prime chapter 27 . 1/29/2011
This story of yours was a wonderful write XD... I loved the scenes when Van Helsing and Anna Valerious make love, you described them perfectly, as the same of the battle scenes and the visions... It's sad Van Helsing finally join with the angels and leave his love but in same time I feel happy when she presence his aura around her, protecting her from evil w... It not all days you find a story raiting M with this two pairings. You made my dream come true, excellent story, YOU ROCK, MY FRIEND! I hope I could see more of your magnificent writing again! See you then...
| SheofCrayonhair chapter 27 . 11/20/2009
First thing I'm going to say... Your story gets my fist ever reveiw! Second i am writing this on a dsi so i won't be the greatest review ever:p And third...I CRIED and trust me i don't cry only time i have ever cried was when i watched Pearl Harbor for the first time. Your story ROCKS. Not only did Anna live( she is my fav. character so i instantly loved it) but it has a really good plot. I loved it. One of the best i've read on here... Definatly a favorite (I read it lik four or five times)
Keep up the amazing writing
| Aiko no Kaze chapter 27 . 2/19/2009
Wow...that had to be the best Van Helsing fanfic I have ever had the pleasure to read. I'm not sure whether I should be happy or sad at the end though...part of me is happy that Gabriel is in Heaven now and acting as Anna's guardian angel, and part of me is sad that they were seperated
GREAT JOB :)
| Dunedain789 chapter 2 . 12/20/2008
It's an increadible story. I was sad that it was Van Helsing that had to leave though! My only complaint was what Anna and Van Helsing were calling each other ("My Love")... I would personally kick my boyfriend's ass if he called me that. I pull faces when he calls me beautiful. Woops! Going off topic! MY BAD! Well anyways. Fantastic story, but having watched the movie several times, Im afraid to say that i firmly believe that Van Helsing isn't how you have portrayed him (character wise). Also! Next time you write a romance fanfic, please keep the sex to a minimum. It brings real adult themes to the story but it does get a little boring after a while. But apart from that it was a fantastic story. Thankyou for not being selfish and keeping such an epic story from the world! :)
| human laundry chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Nice...a little mushy, but nice!
| Giz13 chapter 27 . 4/10/2008
oh gosh i read all the chapters and they were amazing! i loved it! good job on ur 1st ff!
| SamanthaSchizophrenia chapter 14 . 3/22/2008
This is my favorite chapter in the book.
I love the way you used Nightwish's Ever Dream.
One of my favorite songs EVER.
| LightNeverFades chapter 27 . 1/15/2008
OH MY GOD.
This story has been the most GORGEOUS and TOUCHING story in Van Helsing Fandom that I have probably EVER READ! O.O It was made me so tearful and happy at the same time! :) It's such a sad ending, but quite lovely too, because its enchantingly hopeful and makes you smile so wide you'd think your mouth can't stretch any farther! :D :D :D I will so dearly miss the angelic & human Van Helsing!
I am also sad to see this story and journey, finally come to its end. Your writing is fabulous, and I'm so blessed to read it! Thank you so much for making the world a more brighter and mesmerizing place with your writing, and I look forward to more of your works! XD GOOD JOB! -tackle hugs-
| Shoysrock chapter 27 . 1/12/2008
*sobbing* This is a beautiful woven tale of lvoe and sorrow and romance...of Van Helsing..*sobs* I love it...ooh...*blows nose*
| Celtic Aurora chapter 27 . 1/11/2008
*Is in awe of the awesomeness of it all*
That...was...BEAUTIFUL! *sobs while giving a standing ovation*
I..I don't know what to say! It was so...so...and Gabriel ascended, and...*cries some more*
So Much Love and Adoration,