Reviews for Indemnification
Guest chapter 26 . 12/23/2016
I KNEW it was Clockwork who wrote the book! 3 Amazing story! By far one of my favorites. Everything played out and was written very well
Phantom Fire Phoenix 1 chapter 26 . 9/18/2016
A NOVELTY PEN!?
Phantom Fire Phoenix 1 chapter 16 . 9/17/2016
Danny destroyed the Reality Gauntlet
Rowknan chapter 1 . 8/26/2016
Hey I was rereading your fic and I noticed something. Isn't Dan implied to have pyrokinetic abilities in a similar vein to Danny's ice abilities? (Aside from the hair Dan was able to easily survive a fiery explosion, turn the flames blue, and then made them part to let him through) Couldn't that kill Undergrowth? Or is Dan worried that the flames would spread and kill the citizens of Amity Park?
PhantomOfTheBookStore chapter 26 . 9/3/2014
Awesome story! I enjoyed it from start to end. It ended differently from what I thought it would, but still pretty well.
PhantomOfTheBookStore chapter 16 . 9/2/2014
Very interesting so far. I'm enjoying the story. Keep it up.
PhantomOfTheBookStore chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Like it so far.
esran chapter 17 . 8/1/2014
I have to side with Valerie here, Dan is way more at fault. Trying to kill someone is bad, and obviously Valerie shouldn't have done it, but it is basically nothing in comparison to the massacring of thousands.
TheGreatElisaMousy chapter 21 . 4/16/2014
How did you manage to type what Wulf was saying? And... How did I manage to understand about half of what he was saying?
TheGreatElisaMousy chapter 5 . 4/15/2014
After all these years... All the horrors and destruction, the murders and demolition... Dan still calls Vlad a fruit loop.
TheGreatElisaMousy chapter 3 . 4/14/2014
Aww, poor Dan can't even finish a sentence.
Technogirl4304 chapter 26 . 3/23/2014
(Thank you !) I'm much older now and reallllly late reading this story. You may or may not be into the phandom anymore but I DON'T CARE! I read your four-part stories and they were awesome!
Jeremiad: Having the story told in Valerie's pov was beyond great and believable.
Anathema: Having the story told in Dan's pov was creepy yet awesome.
Benediction: Accepting the fact that Dan is part Danny Phantom and Vlad Plasmius and dealing with why Dan the way he his.
Indemnification: The epic ending that tied everything together!
Some questions that have been bugging me and even some that I didn't think about were resolved. The characters matched the characters from the show and then you expanded upon them. It was so fitting.
The can't tell you how much I loved how you fleshed out Dan, keeping the fact that's he's still "technically" a bad guy, but at least exploring the issues on why he was the way he was.
The dialogue was spot on, the action scenes were detailed and not choppy, the witty banter, and keeping the spirit of the show alive, especially since the 10th anniversary is this year. :)
Sigh, I'm sad that I didn't read this story while you were writing it, but you've helped and inspire me to work on my mine writing.
In short, thank you for all of the hard work you put into this story and fleshing out the best DP villain so he's not a straight psychopath. Best wishes to whatever you're doing in your life now and for writing a memorable fanfic story AND completing it. Thank you again. :) 3
AwesomeNumber0 chapter 26 . 10/27/2013
Awwww! I wanna cry! Its finally over! Firts off, i just want to say thats its been a pleasure reading this "mini series". From anathema all the way to indemnification, i loved every minute of it. I loved how you incorporated other parts of the series into the story and i always enjoyed reading Dan. He's such a bastard its funny. I dont know how many times i laughed because of some smart ass comment he made. I liked how you wrote Dan because you went deeper into him and his psychological problems. Anyways, great series. Loved all of the stories and how you wrote the characters. Can't wait to read more from you!
MildMoose chapter 26 . 10/15/2013
i read your entire trilogy in 2 days. this is an incredible fic. i tend to shy away from danny phantom fics; but you not only did the show justice, you went above and beyond. you answered questions i had in the actual series in a way i could accept. no unrealistic or uncharacteristic reactions and interactions in this fic, especially when it came to Dan's turnaround. all in all you did a fantastic job, and i feel very lucky to have come across this fic. thanks for writing :-)
Fangthehedgewolf chapter 26 . 2/20/2013
Words cannot describe how wonderful this story is. . .
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