|Reviews for One Path|
| KitBeast chapter 91 . 11/8/2013
im sorry but i have to say this. i know this story is years old and you've probably lost interest with it but ive just read 91 chapters of this story in one night and i keep getting the overriding feeling that Anakin Kenobi seems to see Vader (im saying Vader cause you have TOO many people called Anakin which makes it near impossible to follow) as more of a father than Obi wan, who is his actual father. not to mention the fact that everything seems to always come back to Vader
| Stanwise chapter 75 . 9/23/2013
This story is remarkable so far. In the past, I never really gave much thought to an Obidala pairing, but you have made it really work here. I must say that I now prefer it over the cheesy canon pairing portrayed in the films which I still nevertheless hold a great respect for. But back to your story: You've stayed true to and even improved the characters in my opinion. I especially like how you portrayed Anakin's fall to the Dark Side. Those ROTS chapters were quite gripping. His motivations are even more believable in this context so kudos! Anyways, I still have not reached the end and am quite a ways off but I figured I should something now. Great job!
| Noelle Kenobi chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Just curious, but y did u put a hyphen between Qui-Gon but not
| Lionchilde chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
This is the author again:
To the person asking about the hyphens in the names:
1. The source material for this story included versions of the script and novels where there was no hyphen in Obi's name. I don't have any source material without a hyphen in Qui-Gon's.
2. If you read the story far enough, you'll find out that there is a plot-related significance to the names and hyphen or lack thereof.
| Michelle chapter 63 . 6/11/2013
I don't get why Leia's memories would have to be erased again. She's 13 years old... She can keep a secret. It's her choice to stay as well... So though she would feel homesick, that fact would help. & she already was a rebel without her memories... So it's not like something changed in her that someone would be sble to sense?
| Michelle chapter 61 . 6/11/2013
Same person as last night. Haha I'm just on my phone now.
I'm glad that you are showing us the kids when they were little... They're so cute & funny! _
& I like that Padme had visions... Nice touch... & that Leia will be a Jedi as well! Girl power! :P
| DepthsOfMySubconsciousness chapter 67 . 6/11/2013
Whoooo.. someone got laid! (I assume) hahah
| DepthsOfMySubconsciousness chapter 43 . 6/10/2013
Yeah, I agree with you.. that you cannot banish the darkness completely... "bringing balance to the force" could very well mean light & dark becomes equal.
& I really liked the analogy about Anakin.
| DepthsOfMySubconsciousness chapter 42 . 6/10/2013
Uh oh... it was all inevitable? Bad Ani, Bad!
| DepthsOfMySubconsciousness chapter 35 . 6/10/2013
But Ani... your father's not even around... lol...
| DepthsOfMySubconsciousness chapter 29 . 6/10/2013
So I love that Qui-Gon has made a reappearance & that he is watching over & training little Anakin. :) So cute. 3 I bet Yoda knows. :P I really want Padme & Obi Wan to find out soon though... it's too funny that Ani can see Qui-Gon & they can't.. & the things Qui-Gon says & does.. ahaha
So... the twins are Luke & Leia, I am guessing? Although they cannot be biologically the same... since Anakin is not their father... possible that it is the same spirits? But then can Luke be the Chosen One without Anakin as his biological father? Questions, questions...
| DepthsOfMySubconsciousness chapter 27 . 6/10/2013
Hmmmm.. what will happen? Luke & Leia will never exist? I'm sad to think about it...
| DepthsOfMySubconsciousness chapter 25 . 6/10/2013
Uh ohhh.. I got a bad feeling that Anakin is gonna make the moves on Obi Wan's woman while he is gone! I bet that Obi Wan will be MIA... & believed dead... & something will happen between Obi Wan & Padme...
| DepthsOfMySubconsciousness chapter 9 . 6/10/2013
I think this would be more in line with Jedi beliefs... not urging a Jedi Knight to obey the code & suppress their feelings... & not telling them what they should or should not do.. or what is right or wrong.. just telling them that they need to make a choice.
| DepthsOfMySubconsciousness chapter 3 . 6/10/2013
Qui-Gon's advice to Obi Wan is very wise & true... but what will the outcome be? I'm sure neither of them are certain.