|Reviews for The Road To Peril|
| Eilan21 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Great retelling of the scene! I like it! Keep writing!(about U&A of course:)
| Daydreamer chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
That was beautiful! I was thinking about writing something like that, but you did it more beautifully then I ever could've! Keep writing no matter what anyone says! :)
| ChildlikeEmpress chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
| NeverDust chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Hello, this was interesting, but there were things which were very distracting:
1: Duncan is an English officer. The Huron are allies to the French.
2. Hawkeye is not Indian.
3. A Sachem is generally a chief. There is generally only one chief. Also, it would then be "sachems" not "sachem's" because the apostrophe makes it possessive instead of plural.
There are other little things too... Might I suggest a beta?
| hey chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
that was amazing
| Mercy Ally 'Thairis chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Excellent work; you are very creative.
Congratulations; I hope to read more of your work soon.
| Issylt chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Sob sob sob! So lovely, yet so sad. I might need a tissue or two.
Unfortunately, you made a bad error of suddenly changing the past tense to present tense! Better go and alter that!