Reviews for The First Bite
This cant be good chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
Update update I need fafic (starts foaming at mouth)lol srry realy good fanfic
BellaCullenVampirz chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Hikari Urania chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
OMG please update soon i must know what happens next please update soon please update soon this is an incredible beginning!
hardcorechecker chapter 1 . 5/27/2008 tht was good. XD
princess-girl45 chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
I love the beginning, it could be a great story, write the next chapter please !
lavenderxbella chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
OMG! OMG! OMG! I love it. You SHOULD keep going
n.a.y.a.z chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
i attempted something a lot like this... although i like your better... mine was only a oneshot. i really want to read more of this. i think you're a great writer. i love the detail you give to their surroundings.
Rhen Nightshade chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
Ow... poor Bells, pain... but still, I like her as a vamp.

dragondreamingsprout chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
wow that was so freaking fantastic! please update soon! you write just like stephenie and its all so easy to imagine... u write extremely well - and i really cant wait to find out what happens next, please update soon -
charmedtomeetyou chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
please update! This is such a great story! :D
TheTwilitNight chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
This story is so good! Please Update
Kasemei-chan chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
fantastic story, hope to read more
SesshomaruLover101 chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
omg that was REALLY REALLY good! i liked it cuz u didnt imedietly start out with biting in to the neck thing like everyone else does -.- it gets anoying so YAY! plez update! ill luv ya 4ever :)
LillyHalliwell chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Later goodbye adios chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
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