Reviews for Phoenix
Guest chapter 4 . 5/5/2013
Omg! He had the key that made the summoning work! :'D
Love TOA and this brought back a lot a good game memories! Thanks
Kari-chan908 chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
Great fic!
LancelotQuanta chapter 4 . 3/7/2011
plzzzzz add more chapters!
Lucem Yoru chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
Awesome, I really hope you make a sequel, it just doesn't seem right to stop this story like that if you understand what I mean.
Asterxia Sy chapter 4 . 2/9/2009
Great novelization of the ending and plus some! I read this while listening to the music playing during these scenes, ah so sentimental! Awesome job!
NexusTehULF0o chapter 4 . 11/10/2008
This was really great! I really enjoyed it! And it helped me with one of my own fanfictions! Thanks! I love Luke/Tear...My second favorite pairing...

* favfavfav *

Nexus
MoonLightKnight78 chapter 4 . 5/31/2008
Hey this was one of my fav. games and this story i love it so far thou the chapters are short hope you update soon.
dark24 chapter 4 . 4/12/2008
Hey not bad at all hope you write more and even finsh this story.

My Friend moonlight Knight loved to...
Viscount luke chapter 4 . 4/1/2008
Hey great story hope you update this one...
Yuelyn the Vampire chapter 4 . 3/2/2008
This story is really making me think. So many possibilites with this story. But I'm glad that you kept the LukeXTear pairing throughout the chapters. I'm also glad that you made Natalia acknowledge the fact that Luke love's Tear. (Dodged a bullet.) Can't wait for the next installment. I really can't give you anymore hints, but maybe you should try to plan things ahead. I mean you already have a good thing going with the "one year" missed thing, but try and think what Tear wanted during those sleepless nights and what Luke would want to do to make it up. In Luke's mind one great day isn't going to make up for Tear's yearning, but in Tear's mind, all that matters is that they spend every waking (and sleeping) moment together.
Yuelyn the Vampire chapter 3 . 3/2/2008
Damn your good! I mean Tear's singing of the Grand Fonic Hymn was the reason Luke came back? Very original! Getting an in depth look in Tear's mind at the last scene, man I was mesmerized. But a year since the final battle... only now it would make sense for the coming of age ceremony. Your good with filling in the gaps. That would also be a strength for you.
Yuelyn the Vampire chapter 2 . 3/2/2008
Playing "Devil's Advocate" huh? Well I'll be content with that for now. You made a minor spelling error, it's "Luke fon Fabre" not "Luke fone Fabre." Still waiting for the final scene, but you're pretty good with cliff hangers. But I'm still looking forward for it to be Luke and not Asch.
Yuelyn the Vampire chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Seeing the end in a new light... Wow, instead of being more of an action end it was more of a romantic end (or should I say beginning.) That is your strong suit, putting things in a new light. Even if the original ending was focused on LukeXTear, your putting it as a they say, "a new perspective". I hope that it'll stay in the same light throughout the rest of your chapters.
Ashley Jo chapter 4 . 3/2/2008
please continue
Samurai Ryo chapter 4 . 12/16/2007
GREAT STORY!
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