|Reviews for Jacob's Note|
| PastOneonta chapter 1 . 2/20
This is very good. Jacob's thoughts, Billy's concerns, the Pack mind, all very good.
| SmartKoala chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
I love this side if Jacob writing the letter. Wish someone good would do the entire eclipse from Jacobs pov.
| Desiree LeJay chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
Oh my god, that was so good!
I love it!
| Alexa Skywalker chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Ok, I totally loved this! Great job!
| ScaryPuffle chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Awesome story! Loved it.
| superstarbella chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
aawesome chapter but can you write the next chapter quikly I REALLY WANNA READ
| Snikerdoodles chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
excellent story. i loved seeing the thoughts behind the words written in the note. and jacob sitting outside of bellas house just to check on her... so sad! great story though :)
| DaniPeace chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Wow you're a good author and I like how you write. Shame poor Jacob. I can't believe Bella chose that soul-sucking leech over Jacob. Anyways the story was good ~Dani.
| TTTTm11 chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
i really enjoyed this story, you captured Jacobs emotions perfectly, you have some serious talent :)
| Weekends chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
This was written so well :) Keep it up
| Bloodsuckin'You chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
A delicious, refreshing read. I encourage you to be inspired even more & maybe continue on with the the story. I love how you made me visualize the two contradictions, Edward & Jacob. Two very different people, one love. Very delightful, exquisite writing, bravo! :)
| bunbun454 chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
oh that made me want to cry... i LOVE jacob and i hate bella for leaving him for stupid edward. Edward doesn't deserve her. Jacob does. Jacob would never hurt her and Edward already did. Stupid stupid edward. GO TEAM JACOB!
| umbuby chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
AW! Poor Jacob! Your a really good writer. You should do more like this!
| happy-days chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
This was so good!
Your style of writing is very refreshing, I liked the way you began and ended with him staring at his ceiling.
Poor Jacob lol. Kid never catches a break...
| MissMoonWillow chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Woah I loved this story so much, I mean I love how it is how I see Jacob feeling.