|Reviews for I wish|
| NY514 chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Make a sequel
| TimPrime1 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Not bad, wish u gave the note a little more meaning, but owelp. I have a lot of notes in my first story, and it was hard doing them, just sayin. But good start, hope that Misty gets together with Ash soon. I am an Ash and Misty fan, not trying to sound mean or anything. I am a nice guy. Well till next chapter.
| Spiraea Kozak chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
This the letter is supposed to be the bulk of the fic... I would expect it to be longer and more details...
If it is just the beginning, then it is fine... It portrays the standard of an illiterate Ash anyway D
| prettygirl17 chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
Ooh! Nice start! Is the wish going to come true? That is a good start. It makes someone want to see what will follow all that. Yay! I'll be reading more of this!
| dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
This is a cute story. Please make some more. Ash and Misty forever.
| FireFox66 chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
Misty and Tracey? ok... good story though try to make your next story longer