|Reviews for Questions and Posibilities|
| inpeace chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
amazing job with such a chalange! the stile seemed to change to much when you switched to ascobol though, sort a like a bunch of great bits but you didn't feel like introducing them write or explaining them write... ? i donknow but it was fun
| xXSummerXx chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
wow. that IS wierd pairing.
you were challenged to do this?
| Thorn In Your Side chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
well, you did write the pairing, i would have to say you won.
but to be brutally honest (as the luvverly folksies as are) i didn't like it. ascobol/john is a very interesting pairing. there are a whole myriad of things you could have done while keeping both in character. ascobol (though i can't say i know him personally) would have been more flippant about the whole affair, john...well, actually you did a pretty decent job with him.
the last part was all too...bleh. like...is that honestly the best you can do with a pairing like this? you could've made it humorous, to some extent.
the part i liked (but still have a bone to pick with cause i'm just weird like that)is the last line about the zipper...but you could've heard more. surely, certainly if its that passionate...you would have heard more. _
and what is that nonsense about djinn never knowing true love?
what about that demon (soz, spirit) who loved another so much he disobeyed his master and blew himself to bits? (btw, if you want a stunning version of that story, read "The Resolute" by Migratory /s/2985776/1/)
all in all...i think this was a very poor display of your talent (of which you have a respectable amount)but still...not at all a bad read.
| 0oxymoronic0 chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
i still dont think its a competition!
wow... you really did it. wow. and made it believable. wow. i cant say anything but... wow. O_O
thanks for being such a good sport! :) i dont mind who 'wins' 'cause we both worked hard for it.
| Mazarin Stone chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
this is certainly... creative. I have to say that I have never come across this ship before. Mandrake/Farrer? Yep. Nathaniel/Kitty. Of course. Bartimaeus/Nathaniel? Practically a given. But this... this is just brand new. Surprisingly well-written though, and it was almost believable! This must have been such a hard one to write though; the only thing we really know about Ascobol is that he's sarcastic to Bartimaeus, which isn't really much.
| karose10 chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
thats really good, you're a great writer. r u going to continue the story? cuz it has alot of potential.