|Reviews for New World|
| Altril chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
This was a very impressive story. I was completely hooked by the first line. Wonderful job with your ability to create OC's and have them be believable at the same time.
Selfishly I would have liked to have a little more description of the city and maybe instead of jumping ahead six months here or a few weeks there it would have been nice to have a view of what a normal day entailed.
All in all it was really good and I'm glad that I read your review of another story where you mentioned this story. Any chance of seeing a sequel in the near future?
| sannnva chapter 2 . 7/5/2007
I really enjoyed these two chapter, with the mixing of unique new characters and old favorites. And those Reptoids are quite creepy! Very well written!