Reviews for Garden Of Eden
SpenstarianCreed1 chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
I just looked at the reviews, and apparently nobody else thought that this was based off of or the idea came from the Giving Tree by Shel Silverstein. I just wanted to point that out.
Anonymous chapter 3 . 4/14/2013
Don't stop writing. Keep up the good work.
woodlandfairykirk chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
this is sooo sad, but truly amazing(:
SilverOrb chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Did you get this story from Garden of Sanctuary by Nes Mikel? Because it's strangely similar. Too similar, in fact.
hamchan chapter 3 . 6/23/2010
It's soooo sad T_T
phoenixandtiger chapter 3 . 4/12/2010
I had to bite my lip to keep the tears in...

Poor, poor, poor Al!

I love this story!
Ice's butterfly's chapter 3 . 3/28/2010
It made me mourn. I am perplexed.

Despite little time I have been registered for years that whenever I read fics. I swear, that never, under any of them, had wept as I did in this. It's perfect, he deserves all the reviews in the world.

The couple I like, is one of my favorites along with Royai. I love your fic, I love the way they develop the plot. It surprised me the last chapter, the money which he gave the argument, a completely credible way to immortal Al Everything, absolutely had too logical, too perfect, the bittersweet end, the garden of flowers, the way no Winry aged ... I feel sorry for Alphonse, must be awful to see all die and be left alone.

Again, thank you for making this wonderful fic I doubt forget it. It's beautiful.

Koto Miharu chapter 3 . 2/27/2010
... Words fail me ...

I've always loved the couple but the fiction is simply incredible, almost made me mourn, I had never gone something like this ... I totally love, the emotional undertone, the newspaper, that theory very well thought out and quite believable by the father, unexpected thread of events from chapter two, the end was so ... sad, truly never felt this feeling of helplessness. I think I've become addicted to this couple, and vere not like before ...


Greetings y que la pases very well.
crescit eundo chapter 3 . 3/27/2009
Holy SHAT man!

That was pure, distilled literary genius!

The plot was amazing, believeable, and it made me not want to go to bed, just so I could find out what happened next. Your use of foreshadowing and suspense was simply phenominal- and that ending.


What got to me most was the flashback, and it hatched a clear image in my head that made me want to cry, which is no small feat. This whole fiction is haunting- in an amazing ly good way. Your portrayal of Winry's struggle was amazing, and the characters were completely believeable in their actions, thoughts, and dialouge. GAWD.

I love it. I love you. c:
Amalia Autumn chapter 3 . 5/12/2008

This was messed up...

...but in a good way. The ending gave me chills. I've seen fics where Al's body was somehow tampered with while in the Gate. He seems like the type who would never want immortality. And the way you portrayed Winry's torn, battered soul was absolutely brilliant. Edward's return was severely messed up, he dies as soon as he comes back...*squints* Just imagine that happening in the movie...




But on a more serious note, I just adored the way you portrayed everything. In fact, I myself have been losing touch with the characters which is why I have not written a thing...your story actually cleared my befuddled head. So I thank you and I also thank you for writing such a brilliant story when brilliant stories are so rare to find nowadays.
Sin3ya chapter 3 . 5/27/2007
Very well written. Solemn and numinous, it has an ethereal quality that is both haunting and touching. It has been a while since I have read a story this good. You put the rest of us to shame.

As much as I was curious about what become of Winry's private life, it was nice to be left in the dark about it. Sometimes it's best to leave it up to the reader's own imagination to fill in those gaps.

In the end, I felt like I was Al, trying to fill in those gaps, and afraid of what I might discover if I were to ever leave that dungeon.

Goodness, I'm rambling. Anywaz, good fic. I hope to see more good things from you. Kudos!
Rosette Thorn chapter 3 . 5/26/2007
That was intense... it made me so sad! This was beautifully written, and the layout was excellent. But it's kind of a happy ending to because- I think- Al joined them in the end. It was very touching!
blackcrimson chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
Wow, this is really sad. Both Ed and Winry died? What about Al? Or is it one of those interpretive fics... How heartwrenching! Great story!
blackcrimson chapter 2 . 5/25/2007
oi... sorry for the late review. This chapter was excellently written, but I feel bad for them...
Gemini chapter 3 . 5/23/2007
Omg! I was crying like crazy. This is so sad. You are the best at writing teary stories.

At the end, when Al closed his eyes, did he die as well? I think that would've been a bit better than just going to sleep because then he would be able to meet up with Win, Ed, ane everyone else.
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