Reviews for Naruto and Ino Choice
Guest chapter 7 . 7/2
why not get sakura to be his little sex slve and some other too be in ben with him
narusaku king chapter 30 . 6/12
please update the story i enjoy reading it
joe chapter 7 . 4/19
U should not have killed naruto and all of the life village
stupidnamexxx chapter 4 . 4/12
Wasn't very comfortable with the time warp And changing the future thing, as well as naruto being too perfect. But boy this is hilarious.
MWRANDOM chapter 19 . 4/1
Better than some of your earlier works from a technical standpoint. Spelling is still an issue though. Plot was pretty good right up until you decided to have so many characters who seemed to be getting by fine without Naruto suddenly reveal that they want him too. It was simply too many too fast. The relationship dynamic up until that point had been done quite well. The only other plot issue is some of the scenes were just so off the wall (like the naked sannin chase on the summons), that they hurt the mostly serious feel of the story. Other than those issues you did a nice job.
fallenicarus00 chapter 31 . 2/24
I Love this story.
Disturbedhrt chapter 30 . 2/4
And that's how you ruin a story with an ending like that
Th 1998 chapter 11 . 11/11/2014
ok does nobody on this side understands how a shadow clone works
Th 1998 chapter 4 . 11/11/2014
you know that shizune was like ten when Naruto waas born or
Guest chapter 3 . 9/19/2014
minato is narutos dad
Matt chapter 4 . 8/28/2014
Dude you need to work on your spelling no offense but you are misspelling kindergarten words.
Nate chapter 2 . 8/26/2014
Status: Cautious

This has the general odor of a Sasuke redemption shitfic - but I'll wait before passing judgement.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/8/2014
The ending doe
Monstter619 chapter 30 . 6/25/2014
Monstter619 chapter 30 . 6/25/2014
I agreed with everthing accept the last chapter I know why u did it but it's just messed up I was thinking of something brighter than that and also having the same fate twice when u try to stop it (get my point).
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