Reviews for Annoyance
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Short and to the point for Derek.
princetongirl chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
loved it update soon
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Awesome one-sided Dasey. Catch ya on the flip side.
Riri20 chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
To be honest, this story is flat.

It's a good plot, but it needs a lot of work. You should have added more feeling to Derek's thoughts. I mean really tell why Casey hanging out with his friends annoys him. Anything to make this story longer.

And another thing "And what was better than to see a crying Casey from other guys."

That means that seeing Casey cry in front of other guys is the best thing ever.

I suggest you work on your grammar.
Zuzzeroo chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
rose chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
i love this, short but that sad kind of way...P
GreySide58 chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Very interesting. Short, but good.