Reviews for Evil Incarnate
Kitty chapter 6 . 9/11/2012
Why did you end the story here?
Ondskan is an AWESOME story that deserves to be told.
Good job so far but I suggest you finish it. xxx
Kitty chapter 2 . 9/11/2012
Love it, you should finish the story!
Luna's moon1100 chapter 6 . 7/24/2011
yayz! go axel! fight teh marly power!
baileymermaid95 chapter 6 . 12/12/2010
Wow! Your story is really good! It's well developed with a clear story line and few grammatical errors! I LOVE you story! But no offense but your summary sucks! I think so many more people would read your awesome story if you had a better summary! I could help if you want me to, but either way I still like your story!
TheWorstKind chapter 6 . 9/4/2010
Redneck Roxas? Haha! Sorry it just made me laugh~ :) Next chappy Please! :)
DearlyBeloved-13 chapter 6 . 9/21/2008
this is cool! please update soon! :D
Retrophilic chapter 6 . 8/7/2008
I feel so sad for Axel! ;.; I hope everything turns out alright for him. And Marluxia seemed so nice at first, but he turned out to be such a bastard. At least he's got Roxas, eh?

Speaking of, Roxas with a southern accent. Hmm... It's kind of funny, but not in a bad way. It's definitely the first time I've ever seen it done in fanfiction, unless it's canon, and it kind of makes me feel proud, since I live in Alabama. XD

Anyways, I hope you update soon! Unless life gets in the way, because I know life can sometimes be an uncooperative bitch.
ReignofNight chapter 6 . 7/10/2008
aw...this is so sweet. its weird, i actually hate marluxia and riku in this fic normally i love them. but hey at least you made them total bastards for plot purposes ha. id favorite..but this isnt my account and im too lazy to sign myself in... ill favorite later tho, promise. hell im alerting this, so please update soon
Catching Robins chapter 6 . 6/30/2008
Aww. This sounds like it'll be a great story. :) I saw a few spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing wrong other than that. Good job so far. The part where Axel had to dig the hole reminded me of Holes. xD
Chaxra-san chapter 6 . 2/6/2008
Roxy's so cute!
Kev the She-Wolf chapter 6 . 1/6/2008
Oh.. Me like so far! 3

Keep up the good work! I like Roxy's accent. xD
pride1289 chapter 6 . 10/5/2007
*wimper* Eh? It over! Continue soon plz!
Peony000 chapter 6 . 8/20/2007
Wow...I am really enjoying this! I hope you continue as this is a really interesting fic!

All the best!

Inky xx
Little Pastry chapter 6 . 7/7/2007
I was a little surprised when you gave Roxas a southern accent. I was like, "What? Why is he talking like that?" But I think it's interesting. Good job. D

Also, please update. I need to know what happens next! *fidgets*
Renrena chapter 6 . 7/6/2007
Such a great story...-tears- poor Axel! He's never going to stop hurting is he? '(

10/10! Please write more! The suspends is killing me!
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