|Reviews for The Black Spot in the Sun|
| pigtopus chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
ZOMG, really nice. Loved it (:
| Drunken Vickster chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
This is not fair: only one review thus far? WELL, I will personally change that. This is good stuff. A little angsty, but I like when people take advantage of Yamato's perspective. Plus, she was topless the whole time. That is a good thing to imagine.
| Icarisain chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Nice piece, sad to see that there's been no reviews as yet. maybe you could consider allowing anonymous reviews?
Some of the sentences look a bit disjointed, though. Is it crap formatting or was it what you were aiming for? Also, spell Kouya's name with the 'u', she's not herself without it...don't be like the USA Jump people. A reader might think you don't care to pay attention to how names are spelt, and I doubt you'd like that.
Adding this to C2, though I do hope that you change the spelling of Kouya's name.