captain ginyu watching everything

What? A single sip of spiked punch sets a saiyan off for a few days? Even if it was the most poisonous thing to a saiyan, it shouldn't be that way for Gohan. He's half human, amd humans are resistant to it. And don't give me crap about saiyans organs working differently. The fact that a hybrid was even possible means that they are similar enough. Also, being a hybrid, his biology would be different from both saiyans and humans. Admittedly, I skimmed through the last few pages, due to the fact that the DRAGGED ON. Like, seriously, I felt like it would never end. So, I may have missed something important, forgive me.

You couldn't leave out Saiyaman? The second worst character to ever be created besides Hercule? That's just uncool.

Jesus fucking Christ! WHY are you giving so much importance to some minor OC character that isn't even strong in comparison to the Z fighters?! Is so lame, at this point I'm just skipping chaptera

kinda disappointed this story is discontinued. This is some top quality writing and for me on the same level with Parcasious. The story line was really intresting tbh especially with the surprises like Gohan's MPD. I also like each characters background story their personal development and even relationship development was really good. Even though it's dragon ball you even made some mundane type of story like the boxing I really like that and it flows well with the story. I Hope you would be able to return and finish this story.

I love this stories. It is one of the best I have red. Please make a chapter 68 please this is really good I mean if you want to you don’t have to if you don’t want to. Keep up the great work stay safe and healthy everyone

I like hercule in this story. He is actually nice compared to other fics.

Something I don't understand, Krillin already told the girls a version of Gohan's past, which included being kidnapped and watching his dad die (in Krillin's version he saidthought his dad diedWhen he explained Gohan's reaction to beating up, almost killing, Erasa's ex-boyfriend and his cohorts that attempted to assault Erasa during the robbery in I think it was South City during their 2 month stay with Gohan after the android attack that destroyed the school. When we found out what happened to Lime.
So why are the girls acting shocked when they learned he was kidnapped and watched his dad getting beaten up and die?

Oh little sisters. .. that was really mean of Bra.

Buena. Historia pero seria cool que Goku. Fuese. Revivido y Gohan se quede con algien mad lo unico malo es que es pareja con Videl

Some spelling errors but great story telling