Reviews for The Kiss
Inmyeong chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
what's the next scene?what happened azuma will tsukino introduse herself was love azuma
Inmyeong chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Im dissappointed
about azuma feeling because he's not love tsuniko as true love
Banana Smiles chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Well that was weird (no offense!)

Although they're a cute couple...

I think Manager Ken and Tsukino will be the couple...

Kyosuke with Maister Kirisaki's sister...

And Kai with Monica...

Kazuma paired with his Japan...

I think so! No offense!
Kaiyako Kagami chapter 1 . 1/11/2008

Aw, that was such a cute story, mixed in with the right amount of angst. It was really cute! Maybe; only if you'd like to or have the time that is; you could write a sequel for the future of these two.

Well even if you don't, this was an awesome story in itself, so good job! I commend you

Kaiyako K.
Saq78642 chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
What Revived Sin said.
mangafreak7793 chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
i can never picture yakipan to be an angst or tradgey
RevivedSin chapter 1 . 5/23/2007

You made me cry. TT_TT

GAH! I knew this pairing was coming the moment Tsukino licked her hands after Azuma held them.

I was so like, "Oh that's hawt. She's so digging him XD"

Not bad though not bad