Reviews for The Monster Within
Motherof8 chapter 15 . 5/18/2013
About time!
Motherof8 chapter 13 . 5/18/2013
Really enjoying this story.
Motherof8 chapter 12 . 5/18/2013
Aww, that was so sweet of edward
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 5/18/2013
Wow, was hoping for epov. You did't disappoint. Thanks
mnov29 chapter 24 . 2/21/2013
I loved this story. It was so good. Great job!
emmab86 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I think this could have been a really good stroy but it stayed much the same as the original- even down to Bella being hopeless. She has her newborn strength so why was she so useless against Laurent? You made it look like Alice V James was about as difficult as human Bella V James - like Alice didn't stand a chance.
LAB1 chapter 25 . 10/26/2012
Very cute story! I really liked it!
twivampsalvatore chapter 25 . 10/14/2012
Great!
Dogluvr18 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
awesome
Guest chapter 12 . 7/4/2012
WHEN WILL THEY BE TOGETHER!
I don't have alot of patience as you can tell.
Please hurry!
I said please.
:(
Jojo657 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
read this story before
Louisvuittonfreak chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Just starting to read...
Tsuruga-Ryuuki chapter 23 . 12/16/2011
The Awesomeness within... cheesy i know...
Randa chapter 20 . 9/14/2011
It's rather unlikely to imagine that Jasper would not be present for the real confrontation. He's the best in battle and has considerable more experience. Actually, separating Alice would be rather idiotic as well. So basically the whole battle plan is flawed and ill thought out.
Sarah chapter 17 . 10/25/2010
ooooo this is getting good!
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