Reviews for The Monster Within
Adela Conners chapter 1 . 1/28/2015
I like it!
Motherof8 chapter 2 . 10/4/2014
Great story. love reading it, again
Motherof8 chapter 23 . 5/18/2013
What a great story. Really interesting. Thanks for writing it.
Motherof8 chapter 22 . 5/18/2013
What a relief!
Motherof8 chapter 15 . 5/18/2013
About time!
Motherof8 chapter 13 . 5/18/2013
Really enjoying this story.
Motherof8 chapter 12 . 5/18/2013
Aww, that was so sweet of edward
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 5/18/2013
Wow, was hoping for epov. You did't disappoint. Thanks
mnov29 chapter 24 . 2/21/2013
I loved this story. It was so good. Great job!
emmab86 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I think this could have been a really good stroy but it stayed much the same as the original- even down to Bella being hopeless. She has her newborn strength so why was she so useless against Laurent? You made it look like Alice V James was about as difficult as human Bella V James - like Alice didn't stand a chance.
LAB1 chapter 25 . 10/26/2012
Very cute story! I really liked it!
twivampsalvatore chapter 25 . 10/14/2012
Great!
Dogluvr18 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
awesome
Guest chapter 12 . 7/4/2012
WHEN WILL THEY BE TOGETHER!
I don't have alot of patience as you can tell.
Please hurry!
I said please.
:(
Jojo657 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
read this story before
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