Reviews for Naruto: New Beginnings
Guest chapter 4 . 7/21/2014
I really love the story
Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2014
( i like the plot and all, but, GRAMMER GRAMMER GRAMMER
Kiyoshi Fox chapter 4 . 1/5/2012
Ok I think you have a good idea and all but you seriously need to SLOOOOOOW DOOOOWN i mean you skipped the intro ductions of your characters all we know about them pretty much is how they look you shouldnt have skipped the part were naruto meets them for the first time that is pretty much a important part. Also i agree with some of the other people team 7 is used in waaaay to many storys just make up a number and call them that. Another thing yes we know narutos favoirte moves are the rasingan and the kagebunshing and here is were im not going to freak out on u like others i only read to chapter 4 soooo i think you you should give naruto some new abilities i mean just make up a power that makes since of course but dont just give him the Kage bunshin and Rasengan and yeah the way u made his student be able to do a rasingan on his first try is kinda lame just saying but this is your story u do it the way u want to :/
mosh chapter 33 . 11/8/2010
take it down, nobody wants to read naruto version2 that is why we read fanfiction, cause we didn't like how the books /mangas were and here u go just doing the same thing team 7 did the first time this story sucks
Nebula1701 chapter 33 . 11/7/2010
ahhh don't take this story down!

One of the reasons I read this story was because Naruto was actually a jounin teacher... these types of stories are rare around here.

There needs to be more of em! .
WolfTail Run chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Your grammar needs some work
DarkRavie chapter 32 . 7/13/2010
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
Your Hoshi chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
I like this!
DarkRavie chapter 31 . 6/20/2010
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
Kazekira chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
This story is crap. Naruto's character would be better off with Kishimoto then a fag like you.
DarkRavie chapter 30 . 1/15/2010
Another very good chapter. I can't wait to read wha happens next in your fic.
technomage chapter 7 . 11/28/2009
The story has a nice plot but considering Naruto is already a jounin and still he has only rasengan and kagebunshin to show thats just sad.
DarkRavie chapter 29 . 11/2/2009
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
DarkRavie chapter 28 . 10/29/2009
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
Final Flame Dragon chapter 5 . 3/7/2009
this is really good, i like it
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