Reviews for Outside Looking In
Erica Dawn chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
I never noticed before but you seem to use "but" a lot in this story. Maybe you could mix it up with "yet" or "However". You also start sentences with "He" and "She" a lot.

I really liked this pairing even though we've had our disagreemants over Draco before...

If someone was going to talk to him he at least wanted them to be sane.

Hehe, love that line.

He felt a hand on his shoulder and turned to see Harry holding out his hand. He took it and hoisted himself up. He nodded at Harry who just handed him the golden ball that had been so important only moments ago and then walked away.


So, how are things?
yutakalamia chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Aw...that's rather sweet...
SpazzyNinjaSpork chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
_ I liked it~!

It's really cute XD I like it more than most of the other DracoLuna fanfics I've read so far :D They're such an unlikely couple, but I love the pairing so much XD Hehe.

Again, great job _
Jay A. Angelin chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
OMG! I loved it. It was written very well and was seemlessly peiced together. Loved it! DDLL is something I never really considered before. Thanks :D
CassieRaven chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
I enjoyed reading this story of yours. Draco/Luna has been a pairing at my heart.
Scratches chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
That was completely what I needed to read, thank you so much for a wonderful oneshot!