I started making a mental note of the awesomely funny lines in this story, so I could tell you how much I liked them, but there were so many that I lost track. This is hilarious and wonderful. I love the bits of philosophy just casually thrown in there. Thank you for writing!

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Ya know, I can totally see Crowley having a sore spot in regards to Satanists. It fits his character.

Nailed the characters here. Hilarious read.

Hey there! I read this fic a few years ago but I couldn't leave a review, and also didn't know the first thing about SPN back then. Now, with several seasons of SPN under my belt, I've come back and re-read it, and I have to say I am extremely impressed.

You have a fantastic grasp on the characterisation of all the canon characters from both canons, and a lovely knack for imitating Pratchett's writing style... combined with the ability for truly horrific implications without going into graphic detail. "She was so tiny" gives me a horrible chill down my spine because it's so clear what's happened without having to have it laid out. And the demon-worshipping trio were well-presented - competent enough to cause trouble with a side-order of dramatics, but also nasty enough to be taken seriously once you showed how far they were willing to go.

The only thing I would say could use some work is your punctuation and a few typos. It's nothing major, but it is noticeable that your punctuation around speech marks in particular tends to be a bit shaky.

That said, it doesn't really spoil the story at all, and I'm so glad you decided to share it with us all!

Yes. This. I only read Good Omens last year, so finding a fic crossing them with Supernatural was highly satisfying. A job well done!

So very awesome! :D

These two fandoms needed to be together and that was perfect. Bratty teenage satanists, meet the demon most likely to take great offense at your pick of sacrifice

... I think you just introduced me to Supernatural.

Uh-oh.

Very interesting, great read!

I love this. I really do. It's the perfect mix of Good Omens and Supernatural. I just have one teeny tiny issue; the inverted crucifix is NOT a demonic symbol. Sorry but this kept bugging me and I had to say. Love the story though.

XD

Oh. This fic. I read is some years ago. I like this one.

Epic!

I adore this story-you got Aziraphale and Crowley pitch-perfect and it definitely has the same hilarious/heartwarming flavor as cannon :3