|Reviews for Supernova|
| Nanimonaimono chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Oh, now this is great.
The idea, execution, the resignation and angst and outbursts and... well, I don't know if this was intentional or not, but since the story begins with Roxas' lucid words, I was imagining the scene 'from his side'. Thus, it was nicely surprising to realize that he was the fake one.
| Souvenir chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
Hmm. Well, don't get me wrong, I liked it! I liked the sharpness of it, the abrupt nature. But...try to refine Roxas's language? Or, if leaving it coarse is important to you, then you could put some more of Axel's thoughts spaced between his words...I don't know...there's something missing, I don't know if it's detail or what.
Or it could be perfect as is. I'm a terrible reviewer, aren't I? XD Anyway...it was good.