Nice! I like it so far and I'd love to see more.

Great start. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Heck, you seem to have a general knack for new ideas or new twists on old ones. :)

One mistake I noticed, though:

"Azguard" - "Asgard" (They took the name from the old Norse home of the gods)

Wow, I just came across this story. I really hope you continue it, it is well written.

I love it, please add more soon!

This is just awesome.

Wow. This is really good and I am dying for more.

Though I did not much enjoy Stargate after the 8th season this story of your does have a fair bit of potential. It will be interesting to see how your story unfolds once Daniel puts his plan into action.

I think endangering all your people to avoid killing people who want to kill you is insane and I think Daniel knows better than that by now. After all how many Jaffa has he been part of killing?