Reviews for Screams Part One
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
ouch.
Mrs Malfoi chapter 1 . 6/12
PRETTY GOOD.
desireejones99 chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Well Nev you really screwed up, that's probably going to leave a mark when they finish
SnuggleKitten69 chapter 1 . 8/23/2015
Some people break under just the implied threat of pain. I am so happy your version of Hermione was so very much stronger.
Rape isn't an effective means of torture. It is more an act of violence with nuances of dominance and control. Inflicting pain is an art form. Electricity, like the cruciatus curse, is effective because the main stops but the memory of the pain lingers for years.
I very much ch enjoyed this story and look forward to reading the subsequent pieces.
Lord Sykox Charr chapter 1 . 8/2/2015
Nice concept... :) but left of any actual action
ambersnowflake chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
My God! * faints * * jumps up * It's creepy, it's gonna give me nightmares! I love it! * faints again *
daniella2cool chapter 1 . 4/29/2015
This was so good!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
Wow. Man, this is intense!
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Somehow I don't feel sorry for Neville. That's what should happen to all the traitors (at least this time it wasn't Ron who betrayed Harry and Hermione).
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Really nice story, very well-written and perfectly laid out personas in my opinion.
amber.saurus chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
Are I see now! I'd read the third part first so I didn't get it! Loved it!
lupuslady chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
WOOOOOOWWW
I don't know what else to say except amazing! Your writing is amazing!
Deidara chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
It has been a long time since I read a story that was such a breath of fresh air. Dark, yes, but beautiful, original, well written, interesting, and all of that. Very, very well done.
Ppsh chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Beautiful.
Etch chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
Wow. I actually really liked this. The title had made me curious, and the warning almost made me turn away, but I read it, and it was great. You made my day, using proper grammar, too. XD
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