OMG SO AWESOME

ouch.

PRETTY GOOD.

Well Nev you really screwed up, that's probably going to leave a mark when they finish

Some people break under just the implied threat of pain. I am so happy your version of Hermione was so very much stronger.
Rape isn't an effective means of torture. It is more an act of violence with nuances of dominance and control. Inflicting pain is an art form. Electricity, like the cruciatus curse, is effective because the main stops but the memory of the pain lingers for years.
I very much ch enjoyed this story and look forward to reading the subsequent pieces.

Nice concept... :) but left of any actual action

My God! * faints * * jumps up * It's creepy, it's gonna give me nightmares! I love it! * faints again *

This was so good!

Wow. Man, this is intense!

Somehow I don't feel sorry for Neville. That's what should happen to all the traitors (at least this time it wasn't Ron who betrayed Harry and Hermione).

Really nice story, very well-written and perfectly laid out personas in my opinion.

Are I see now! I'd read the third part first so I didn't get it! Loved it!

WOOOOOOWWW
I don't know what else to say except amazing! Your writing is amazing!

It has been a long time since I read a story that was such a breath of fresh air. Dark, yes, but beautiful, original, well written, interesting, and all of that. Very, very well done.

Beautiful.