| Reviews for Screams Part One |
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   pandas9 chapter 1 . 7/3/2011 One word: Damn. |
| samuelsnape chapter 1 . 6/19/2011 I liked it. Makes me think that Harry & Hermione are the next Dark Lord and Bellatrix. |
| TillyMe chapter 1 . 3/22/2011 Creepy. Freaky. Out of charecter. Unrealistic. So gooood! *drools* :) |
| deleted2012 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 I LOVE IT! Somehow, the Dark Hermione/ Dark Harry pair going round and making all their enemies 'scream' is just... perfect! I had some difficulty believing Neville's betrayal... perhaps something more should have happened concerning Bellatrix for him to do so. I also would have loved it if we could have 'heard' Neville's screams... |
| FaerysWing chapter 1 . 11/3/2010 Why wouldn't they keep something of Ron's? There's kinda the feeling that he doesn't really matter... |
| reignstein chapter 1 . 10/27/2010 'THUMBS UP' I really liked it! And since it's so close to halloween I think i'll let my friends read this! 100% |
| raka chapter 1 . 10/10/2010 nice story... very good... |
| xBloodSplatter chapter 1 . 8/7/2010 Wow never read anything like this before. Quite interesting. |
| Flawless Masquerade chapter 1 . 7/22/2010 A well-detailed, swiftly executed horror. I love the fascinating attention shown to Hermione's "state", as well as the twist of Neville's betrayal. It's also very nice to read a fanfic that isn't full of errors :) All in all it's quite a delicious read. I was only passing by this story and somehow I ended up reading the whole thing; amazing. I think the fact it wasn't too long worked in its favour, too, as long, drawn-out horror stories typically end up just being depressing! ~Masquerade |
| Nerdy Nymph chapter 1 . 6/29/2010 holy crap I love it! hate neville fordoing that but I could actually picture what you wrote..utterly facinating |
| user2094873 chapter 1 . 5/16/2010 This gave me chills. Very well done. |
| darklordmike chapter 1 . 9/24/2009 Brilliant! |
| RANGER99 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009 That was insane, 5/5 excellent one-shot |
| jrath chapter 1 . 5/21/2009 wow that was totally awesome... ...yeah, awesome |
| pstibbons chapter 1 . 5/19/2009 I like insane!Hermione... Best lines: She shot up like a bolt and he recoiled as if she was a poisonous snake. A smile graced her face. “But then Harry brought me more screams,” she said with a bright smile. “He was always so thoughtful, Harry was. He dragged some Death Eater kicking and begging for mercy into my cell. Harry threw him at my feet and made him scream. It made me warm. Then Harry brought me Voldemort; he was fun, his screams were so very shrill; when Harry emasculated the snake, he even got higher,” the brunette touched her bosom lovingly. “So warm and happy...” |