Reviews for Screams Part One
Silent Avid Magma chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Fascinating. Never seen this kind of plot before.. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
KylieWhy chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
omg i loved that! usually i dont read dark fics but that was awesome! hermione was hilarious.
Aravis T chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Great story, when i went to the movies to see Dark Knight, i just couldn't stop thinking in your fanfic XD

I really loved the whole Screams Series!

Bye!
cheaterinpink chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
AWESOME! Definitely creepy and scary but it was cool! I can't believe Nevile would sell out his friends for vengeance. Stupid fool. Good job. :)

Amanda Bridget
X-Axis chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
Cheesy,but amusing.

8/10
pav chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
My is one of the best if not the best short Dark story of HP class piece of should try to make living as a professional writer.
Junior1544 chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
uhm, wow...

man, that's dark and depressing... good writing, but still, very damn dark and depressing...

great job!

-James
Banner chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
* cowering *

* deep breath *

OK, that was good.
Tommy14 chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
This was a great eerie Dark fic. I love how Harry is taking care of Hermione's needs...
Ultimate Auror chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Holy shit, love. I don't know what drew me to this, but I was looking at your page, and stumbled across this.

What an eerily beautiful tale of woe and betrayal.

Your Hermione is so... void... so... hollow. It gives me pleasant chills that will likely haunt me for a while.

This sounds so choppy, this review, but I cannot properly voice how I feel about it. It makes me smile, that this is so beautifully dark.

“Please fill me up and give me a lot of wonderful screams.” How troublesome and maniacal. This Hermione is chillingly wonderful.

I can't think of anything else to tell you, I don't know how to say it. This is the first darc/horror fic I have read, and to be totally honest, the only reason I read it in the first place was because I adore you. Now, I am eagerly off to read more in the 'Scream' Saga...
n00b-masta2112 chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Wow. So very haunting and beautiful. The darkness makes it so wonderful. Frightening and entertaining. Sick and perfect. This story is amazing!
fearlessleader5784 chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
dude/dudette, why dont you write on sword of gryffindor anymore, that stuff was hilarioius, i think you should go back to humor, its more you.
pegasus52 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
WOW! I both liked it and didn't liked it. It's a very well written, a very strong piece. But I just have a problem wrapping my mind around the idea of Neville turning in Harry, Hermione and Ron like that. And the way Hermione was portrayed I can only think she had gone insane as did Harry. It was like how Ollivander discribed Voldermort, "After all, He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named did great things - terrible, yes, but great." That's how this story was, "terrible, yes, but great."

HAL
FF Reads chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
I... I think it was creepy. Cool, but creepy. Ugh... Hermione kissing a tongueless Harry! Ugh...
littletempest chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
Whoa... that was really good. Scary and really well written. I'm in awe.
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