Reviews for Screams Part One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fascinating. Never seen this kind of plot before.. I look forward to reading more of your stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i loved that! usually i dont read dark fics but that was awesome! hermione was hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, when i went to the movies to see Dark Knight, i just couldn't stop thinking in your fanfic XD I really loved the whole Screams Series! Bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! Definitely creepy and scary but it was cool! I can't believe Nevile would sell out his friends for vengeance. Stupid fool. Good job. :) Amanda Bridget |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cheesy,but amusing. 8/10 |
![]() ![]() My is one of the best if not the best short Dark story of HP class piece of should try to make living as a professional writer. |
![]() ![]() uhm, wow... man, that's dark and depressing... good writing, but still, very damn dark and depressing... great job! -James |
![]() ![]() ![]() * cowering * * deep breath * OK, that was good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great eerie Dark fic. I love how Harry is taking care of Hermione's needs... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit, love. I don't know what drew me to this, but I was looking at your page, and stumbled across this. What an eerily beautiful tale of woe and betrayal. Your Hermione is so... void... so... hollow. It gives me pleasant chills that will likely haunt me for a while. This sounds so choppy, this review, but I cannot properly voice how I feel about it. It makes me smile, that this is so beautifully dark. “Please fill me up and give me a lot of wonderful screams.” How troublesome and maniacal. This Hermione is chillingly wonderful. I can't think of anything else to tell you, I don't know how to say it. This is the first darc/horror fic I have read, and to be totally honest, the only reason I read it in the first place was because I adore you. Now, I am eagerly off to read more in the 'Scream' Saga... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. So very haunting and beautiful. The darkness makes it so wonderful. Frightening and entertaining. Sick and perfect. This story is amazing! |
![]() ![]() dude/dudette, why dont you write on sword of gryffindor anymore, that stuff was hilarioius, i think you should go back to humor, its more you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! I both liked it and didn't liked it. It's a very well written, a very strong piece. But I just have a problem wrapping my mind around the idea of Neville turning in Harry, Hermione and Ron like that. And the way Hermione was portrayed I can only think she had gone insane as did Harry. It was like how Ollivander discribed Voldermort, "After all, He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named did great things - terrible, yes, but great." That's how this story was, "terrible, yes, but great." HAL |
![]() ![]() ![]() I... I think it was creepy. Cool, but creepy. Ugh... Hermione kissing a tongueless Harry! Ugh... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa... that was really good. Scary and really well written. I'm in awe. |