"Brute force without guidance is nothing more than brute force." Feels kinda awkward.

As a suggestion: "Strength without guidance is nothing more than brute force".

Otherwise, I'm intrigued by this story and eager to see where it went.

Wtf did kal leave his crystal fortress on hoth where anyone could find it

Don't get me wrong I love mara jade she's one of my favorite star wars characters. But her with kal el just doesn't work to me. Winter would of been much better for kal

Honestly as long as general zod is around it's better to keep palpy

Xray vission, also,

You better give the emperor kryptonite.

Yeah, about gods, cannon anakin and legends luke each killed a god.

So, I'm going to be honest, vader is basically immortal unless he turns back from the dark. The suit does keep him alive but Vader can survive with sheer will. Also psycic attacs still work. Also just for fairness I think the force should be able to stand up to supermans powers.

Wait a minuite, I know that Alias, red hair , green eyes, seems suspicious, yup You know if she was less suspicious I wouldn't have realized.

Thanks for writingband sharingbthis! What a wonderful ending!

This has been so good. The Alliance's plans have been show in entertaining detail. Very cathartic

This is so good! the action scenes are superbly written and engaging. The characters have death and you show their changes over time. Thanks for writing and sharing.

"I thought Naboo was safe"
"Alderaan is different, Kale"

couldn't stop laughing

Hah! fun way to show Han's escape from the empire. liking this fic already. Thanks for sharing!

The dumbest story