Reviews for The Grief of Melian
AC2 chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
I like it. You have dealt very well with the grief of Melian, and with the consequences of the Valars' inaction that led to the Kinslaying at Alqualonde. You have a good understanding of these Beings' attitudes; particularly of the distance they have from the people they aare supposed to be having fellowship with. Well done - and good luck with your exams.
Calenlass Greenleaf chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Makes sense. But poor Melian...having to endure this much grief.