|Reviews for Possession|
| WonderRin chapter 33 . 3/9
I loved the story! It was really amazing!
What you have to improve is nothing really. Just make sure that you are putting correct punctuation.
Loved it, once more! Keep up the good work, please!
| Guest chapter 33 . 2/15
Ok, so let me get this straight: Neji spends nearly half this fic physically, mentally, and emotionally abusing Hinata... and we're supposed to be happy he ends up with her? Forcing kisses and bruising arms despite tearful pleadings of no
are the new Valentine's Day cards?
While his "true love" is away, he sleeps with his caretaker - only three times though, because oh, how he loves his Hinata *rolls eyes* - yet becomes jealous when Hinata is merely talking to another guy. However, that can be explained as we all know men DIE if they don't have their female stress relievers (sexist much?)... and if Hinata did the same, she's a slut.
He also takes advantage of the position Izanami is in (after all: she's a whore, they don't have feelings, right?) and his treatment of Tenten is even worse - yup, a real class act you've ended up with, Hina.
No woman of any sane mind would love her abuser; Kishimoto's overly saintly Hinata perhaps, but that's still a big maybe. In the end Neji still considers and talks of her as his "possession", though I'll admit he treats her better.
What I've never understood is how anyone can find this "cute", "romantic" and "sexy" - is this really what you people (author and reviewers) consider romantic? If yes, there's no wonder the number of rapes and cases of wife battering are so high.
| BrujaLoca chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Este fic es de los mejores que he leído, yo no leo muy bien el ingĺés pero lo traduje; es tan bello, ame el desarrollo de la historia, ojala hagas más historias NejiHina de este tipo, felicidades por tan excelente historia y mil gracias por traerla para todos nosotros.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
I love this story. I'm already on ch. 16. I've been thinking though that you should totally make a naruhina story like this where they become best friends in the academy and everything. I think it would be cool.
| Gaara's-Hina-Chan chapter 33 . 11/17/2013
Wow! ł seriously LOVED this! It was an amazing beautiful story that was written wonderfully! ł loved the ending it was adorable ;;) made me wanna cry! Beautiful story epic! ł loved it!
| WoHoYo chapter 5 . 11/15/2013
Good story so far, but him getting so mad just because she addressed him as sama was a little uncalled for and he overreacted. Could've had a bit of a better reason to hate her, but still a nice story
| Guest chapter 33 . 10/27/2013
I absolutely loved this story. You're by far the best writer on this website. Keep up the great work in all of your endeavors.
Much love, Oshin
| legendofpanties chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Well written, cuteness overall, but slightly boring.
| StuBBii chapter 27 . 9/21/2013
NOOOO NEJI U WHORE! oh wells. honestly i don't know how i feel about hinata being so accepting. yikes mary sue-ish
| StuBBii chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
OMGGG SO KAWAIII! I love their cute child scene together ahhhhh!
| Heart-Misery chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
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| Myriam Hernandez chapter 33 . 8/23/2013
I loved it!
| Enderkiller77 chapter 33 . 8/20/2013
Amazing... The ending was so well done, and everything seemed so realistic and I could honestly envision this happening in the Naruto universe... INCEST FOR THE WINCEST XD You just made me love Neji x Hinata more!
| babyang6066 chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
I just started to get into naruto fanfics. Thanks for seeing past the fact that their cousins to create a romantic story. It seems that taboo relationships have to most interesting plots._
| EmelyeUchiha chapter 33 . 7/24/2013
I'm crying. It ended so good.