Reviews for Possession
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16
im the kind of person that never consider marrying a first degree cousin as taboo and illegal, even in canon, neji was deeply, secretly inloved with hinata, though i have a guess that hinata also has a different feeling towards him subconciously, and i really hate kishimoto for killing neji's character, obviously, kishimoto knows that nejihina pairing exists in canon
RandomWriter1093 chapter 1 . 8/31/2021
14 years later and this is still the best NejiHina fic out here. A classic in my eyes!
CrimsonPrincess14 chapter 33 . 7/28/2021
Great story! Though I would've preferred Neji to suffer a little more hahaha... Keep up the good work!
HyuugaPrincess15 chapter 2 . 6/10/2021
Did you use to have a multi chapter Sasuke and Hinata fanfic?
She dated Naruto but ends up marrying Sasuke after divorcing a guy she married so hanabi didn't have to marry me him.
Kreamx00 chapter 1 . 3/29/2021
I love Neji so much... and this fic did the one thing I thought to be impossible and that is hate Neji. I'll never forgive you for that. Just kidding, it wasn't my cup of tea but cool concept though.
Guest chapter 28 . 2/26/2021
The entire thing just left me with an icky feeling of disgust. Hinata shows no personality development. More disappointingly, the author fails to show how Hinata's new, less pressurising position influences her personality. Though shy and gentle, with less pressure of expectations from her father and even a fairly happy childhood, you'd expect some of the low self-esteem issues to be ironed out at least. She stutters to the point that I wonder if she has a speech disability (or whatever it is properly referred to as). Her personality is even more disappointing. For one thing, she makes a friend out of Naruto be that has no influence on her personality either. So frustrating...worse? What is the basis of her love for Neji? That they played together in their childhood days?

Neji goes from obsessive, overprotective as a child to obsessive, possessive guy while hurting her mentally.

It was easier to support a relationship with Naruto or Sasuke or any other male characters. Neji's motive for his hate was a flimsy as wet tissue. Despite changing a lot form the Canon, the story fails to show the influence, even minor ones, of this on the other canon cast members or even the storyline.
Guest chapter 33 . 2/16/2021
I really enjoyed reading your story. It had a nice flow and the ending was so cute. Way to bring it full circle. The only tick I had throughout was you always wrote “apart” when I think you meant “a part” since apart indicates separated from. Anyways, this was a great read. I hope you make it as a novelist and I plan to give your other stories a try. Thank you for sharing!
Guest chapter 28 . 2/16/2021
Ugh. SMH. How did I know that Hinata was going to fall into Izawhore’s trap...
Guest chapter 26 . 2/15/2021
“... the young timid woman's days would become shortly numbered?” Please don’t kill off Hinata
Guest chapter 25 . 2/15/2021
SasuHina? Yes please!
Guest chapter 22 . 2/15/2021
NaruSaku huh? Well I guess that was to be expected... at least Sakura isn’t a thot in this story like she is in a lot of other fanfics. LoL
Guest chapter 21 . 2/15/2021
Thanks for explaining Neji’s relapse into his old ways. It seemed a little contradictory reading through but makes total sense now.
Guest chapter 19 . 2/15/2021
I love this version of Hanabi. They have a great sisterly relationship. ️
Guest chapter 17 . 2/15/2021
Now I’m turning as red as a tomato...
Guest chapter 15 . 2/15/2021
Now I really wish the childhood friendship between Naruto and Hinata were canon. It would make their eventual coupling make so much more sense. Not that I’m against NaruHina, but their relationship is so one-sided throughout the series with Naruto more focused on Sakura that it almost seems like she got 2nd place. Maybe even 3rd place after Sasuke.
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