Reviews for Possession |
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Izen chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 It's cute. Really cute. I'll be waiting for your update, ne? Good luck with the second chapter! |
muddledthoughts chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 Aw... that was just so cute! -squeals!- Too adorable! So about Hizashi, seeing as though he has a serious illness if he died that would make Neji head right? So if he died while Neji were still let's say a teen he'd take over, correct? But wouldn't that cause a lot of problems? And what of the whole kidnapping thing, that never happened huh? You've got a great story and concept going here; I've always wondered myself how different things would turn out if Hiashi was 2nd born and Neji was the heir by birthright. Keep writing I want to see how it'll all turn out! |
wittyying chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 aw...it's so cute. I'm feeling a little sad for Neji and Hizashi-he already lost his mother, and he's going to lose his father soon too? Hopefully, with Hinata by his side, he won't become too bitter. I'm curious to see how their relationship grows as they do. I would love it if you continued this. |
liz chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 This is very well written, and incredibly cute :) I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the wonderful work! |
Mitsu-Sama chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 New chapter please! |
Rosegoldmoon chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 Well, I found the idea really cute, and I think that if Neji and Hinata had a better relationship from the star then Hinata would gain confidence as well, besides they are cute. and Hinata is strong, damn it! lololol. Anyway, like I said, I found the idea interesting, see you latter. |
nasra ahmed chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 you are my favorite author. your amazing and i love every thing you do. Plus you actually updated! this story is good but please don't kill neji's dad until he is more will adjusted i do not want him hating hinata like the real plote line is suppose to be different. the conflicted should come from him not having time for hinata because of is new duties and hinata moving her love to Naruto in her academy years,and neji not liking it one bit. this is just a my point of view, i hope you think about it, but if you were going to go another way i look forword to it and will LOVE anyways. JUST KEEP WRITING AND UPDATING FOR BOTH STORES PLEASE ! P. a hinata itachi next time |
Glum chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 I really like this pairing and I'm fond of your other fic so I hope you will continue. |
xNeglectedxRejectx chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 aw! It's cute! Update! |
swtjapgrl chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 very adorable! update soon |
Miss0made chapter 1 . 5/21/2007 oh.. my.. goursh! That ish so cute. I in lovve! I love nejihina. I can already tell this will be wicked awsome |
LadyBardock chapter 1 . 5/20/2007 Sweet and fluffy :) I loved it! Hope you write more chapters soon :) Added to my favourites :D |
Kokoro Mizu no Kaze chapter 1 . 5/20/2007 update ASAP! . . .please? |
rockstar1093 chapter 1 . 5/20/2007 It's heading off to a good start. I've always been curious to see how the Hyugas would turn out if Hizashi had been born first. I hope you continue the story so wi won't be curious any longer _ |